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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2020 3:10 PM Title: Epilogue

I can't believe this story has so few reviews. I think it is really original and it's a pity this is the epilogue. I would have liked to have a quick view of what happens behind the epilogue.

Thank you for writing and until next time (maybe?)!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07 2020 2:26 PM Title: Sixth Sense

Exciting story. I wonder who is behind these murders.

Thank you for writing and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2020 6:39 PM Title: A Silent Mansion

Your story's premise has a lot to offer.  Unfortunately your story is hard to follow for a few reasons.

You should break it up into paragraphs, which apparently you did but it did not come across in your posting.

You seem to be confusing the term "victims" with "suspects, which makes it hard to understand who is who.

A little clean up from a grammar perspective would make your story much easier to read.

Please do continue.

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