[Report This]Date: January 28 2020 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well written and lots of nice details. I enjoyed the premise a lot too. I personally could have done without the sour patch stuff but each to their own I guess.
[Report This]Date: January 26 2020 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
That's a Texas-sized 10-4.
Love the story, appriciate the attention to detail.
Date: January 26 2020 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Incredible fantasy story. What else will she swallow / eat him as? Will she ever let the scnenario play out so completely that he passes entirely through her?
Keep it going.
Date: January 26 2020 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was a fun read! I would love to see more in this universe. Would you ever follow through after he gets eaten? Like either all the way through digestion, or if he gets absorbed and becomes a part of her, like her butt? And there are many other stories,let someone else accidentally eating him. And so many things he could become! She could apparently even transform him into like a bra or thong if she were in the mood. I just like all the possibility of the world you created. Keep up the great work!