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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2020 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

I got the no witness part. I was just teasing a bit on that.

Pretty good short chapter on this, but I would have liked to see some more of her.

I join the previous reviewer and say that I'm sad that the story ended.

Thank you for writing and I'm still hoping there will be a next one!

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2020 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great story, sad it's over! Would have liked to see more time with Alice using her butt to crush / punish people. 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2020 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 3

Serves him right for interupting her fun with Nicole.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2020 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 2

Thanks for the update, I like the story.

Seems like Alice is really owning her all-powerful role and lashes out

Easily, maybe a bit too easily. Wouldn't people start to notice that Alice makes many people dissapear? And then if course send more people her way in an attempt to stop her?

Thank you for writing and I'm looking forward to the next one.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your feedback! The idea I had in mind was that she was able to get away with what she did because she left no evidence and no "witnesses". Therefore Alice couldn't be traceable to any of the disappearances.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2020 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 2

Alice has to educate another girl on proper respect.

Reviewer: Questathana Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2020 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm really liking it so far!

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