[Report This]Date: March 20 2020 4:18 PM Title: Accusations
I think Roshan is kinda right on this one. This tiny girl isn't really a giantess. But yeah, you also don't expect to be stolen by the girlfriend of the guy you have been chatting with.
And she is also right again about the guy being at fault here. On the other hand, he couldn't really know his gf could grow this big.
I really like this story because the torture is a bit more drawn out compared to your normale stories and there is a bit more interaction and mind games before the crushing. Your trademark descriptive writing makes it even better.
Thank you for writing and until next time!
[Report This]Date: December 30 2019 3:46 PM Title: Questioning
Now the story gets interesting. Stocking torture is one of my favorites.
Roshan seems like a pretty good giantess. Why didn't he shrink before? No wonder Roshan is angry he went to someone else.
And yeah, she really tracked down the tiny woman easily. Is Roshan a super spy?
Thank you for writing and until next time.
Author's Response:
Everyone loves a good time in a stocking, why else would they have become holiday decor?
She's reluctant, but coming into the role. Ironic that she started doing it because her boyfriend liked to pretend shrink with someone else more than spend time with her.
She's just a smart woman with a drive to get back at someone, which is the greatest motivation possible.
And thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: December 30 2019 2:38 PM Title: Questioning
I love Roshan's personality, it comes across very real in your style of writing. I like her way of talking through your dialougue as well. Like at the end when she says "I think I can live with it", or when she says "I've never been this abjectly tiny before, this is a problem you created." It is a very good way of freshening up the way a giantess talks. Sometimes we write the same phrases and taunts over and over again that the dialogue starts to sound generic and dull, but this was very refreshing and fun to read. Keep it up!
Also, the descriptiveness of your writing is awesome too. I loved the phrase "judgmental stare" I might steal that one for myself!
I'm very looking forward to reading more of this story! I hope you continue this story, I love the charachters so much!
One question though, who is Mariam? Was that a mistake or did I miss something?
Author's Response:
Thank you! I've been told before that my giantesses seem "real," which I guess comes out with that. They have their own motivations and mannerisms, and in general I try not to fall back on stuff like "You like that little man?" when writing. Though I do like a "Fee-fi-fo-fum" every so often.
I've always thought descriptions are key to making it a much more real situation and immersing the reader in the experience, which is helped by writing in first-person.
As for that, the simple answer is I drink while writing and have multiple stories going, and a few editing passes don't always catch everything.
[Report This]Date: December 24 2019 4:23 PM Title: Arrival
Damn, this is better than my request idea. Thank God for more creative people (like you and evel-inc).
I wonder how this Rosh-girlfriend managed to steal a giantess.
And talking a lot to people in text, but then being speechless when meeting in real life is something I can relate too. But let's hope that the protagonist does actually has the conversation skills to not get crushed by his giantess girlfriend too quick.
Thank you for writing and until next time!
Author's Response:
Your idea was no less fun to write than any other :)
He's going to have to do some quick talking to get out of this, but Roshan has a couple verbal tricks up her sleeve, too.
And thank you for reviewing!
Date: December 23 2019 8:36 PM Title: Arrival
I love it.
Question though; didn’t Roshan give the OK on him chatting/role playing online? Her actions seem contracting.
Also, at the end, there’s someone named Mariam mentioned? “Mariam filled the gap with a deep chuckle which resonated throughout our tiny, hand-held vessel.”
But I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
The key phrase is as long as it doesn't interfere in time with her. As we find out later, it does.
Thanks for pointing that out, it hid from two sets of eyes and three passes. I have a character named Mariam and introducing one named Roshan, and they're from the same language so I must have gotten them mixed up.
[Report This]Date: December 23 2019 8:05 PM Title: Arrival
Can't wait to see what happens next. Things are about to get very interesting! And I think the exposition is mixed so well with the dialogue. It all just flows very easy and is a joy to read. Please don't wait too long for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Another chapter will be along shortly, don't worry!