Date: December 19 2019 6:54 PM Title: Waking up from a dream, into a nightmare.
I dont comment alot but sometimes just got to say something this is a good story alot going on but I see how it is going reading this I just get that twilight zone moment where i am just like wtf I can see where this idea came from the amount of physical and mental torture just great good work cant wait see ehar happen next and cant wait for the next chapter of the shield hero story and to the little princess troll who comment before this fuck you stick to your picture books
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it Godzilla. I lot of planning went into these two parts, and I hope the second half will live up to your Twilight Zone expectations. XD
This was definitely one of my harder stories, but all and all, it was a great learning experience, and I think I came out better for when I attempt some more psychological structured stories in the future.
I don't know when the next half of Rising of the Shield Hero will appear, but I think Raftalia's been waiting patiently for a turn to get back at Bitch, so we'll see what happens. :P
Thank you for the review, along with other, kind word's. ^,^
Date: December 19 2019 3:12 PM Title: Waking up from a dream, into a nightmare.
It was a load of crap,'if your into torcher and murder plus a plot that was way out there and just as confusing,I though the boy was going to be a main character hell you didn't give him a personality every thing was to fast and to soon and what was the story about you can have all the raw and hot sex there is but if the plot is terrible no body will wont remember the story if your want pepole to like it make the characters more likable but never stop writing you got talent for sure
Author's Response:
Thank you for your input. I can assure you, I never intend to stop writing. :)