Date: June 12 2021 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Home Alone
Unfortunately I'm not sure this story will continue. Authormadrigal16 wrote the 5 chapters a year and a half ago then has not returned to write more. I too want to find out what will happen next but the author lost interest or just couldn't continue. He did not even give names to wife and daughter yet. Premise great but author disappeared.
I hope he or she will return to give us more.
[Report This]Date: May 21 2021 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Home Alone
Wow! this is very interesting! Loving to be small around adult women is popular and has lots of stories. But, you have been very specific about John's fantassy which involvs his daughter but puts a fine line before it gets too awkward. I absolutely loved the part where John stands infront of the height chart and looks up at his daughter's height mark, his wish of having to stand on tip toes to kiss his little daughter, wearing her hand me downs, imagination of being even smaller and being able to sit on his daughter's lap .... very well detailing! Before it could get too awkward, it was very well managed!
This story at the moments is hanging at a very high note. I badly wish to see the continuation of this story! How will the father-daughter relation be when his wife and daughter returns? Will he be even smaller? What will happen when his daughter will grow? How the relationship will develop with his daughter's growing?
And - How did this specific fantassy developed in him? Was it from some incident from his childhood? What about his family beofore marriage? I mean parents, brothers, sisters, nieces ... etc.
Hell this can be like a psychological novel!
Date: April 24 2020 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Home Alone
I still hope this is updated with more.The author hinted at what was to come.
Wondering: no mention is made of the names of John's wife and daughter.Why are they going to the airport and then presumably leaving the car in the airport parking lot for a week or so? Doesn't John need a car during his week or so to get to work (so he told them), or other things? Unless he works from home. And now he'll be too small to drive without raised pedals.
Now that he's three feet tall what's he going to do the next week or so--just stay home and await their arrival back? Does he continue to wear his daughter's clothes or somehow get boy sized shirts, pants, etc?
Date: March 02 2020 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Home Alone
This is an incredible story, you've hit on a lot of great ideas, and in an area that is very unusual in many ways. Love it. Can't wait to see what happens next! Excellent work!!
Date: January 17 2020 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Home Alone
Good so far, want to see more.It will be interesting
if he's still like that when they return (so far names
not given of wife and daughter).He could get smaller too.
You had him resembling a 5 year old boy who somehow
went through puberty.Children have different body dimensions
than an adult who somehow shrank proportionally. If he shaves, etc, he could even pass for being a young girl or boy.
The shock the daughter would have of her daddy being smaller than her.
Might he become baby size or doll size?
As much as he'd like being small, he'd have to face problems of size and lack of strength.One of her high energy kid friends could shove him aside, even if just in spirited play.The advantages of being small exciting him would be worth it to him though.
And imagine if his wife and daughter come back, and he goes out for a walk--and gets kidnapped? The wife could put out an Amber Alert
for her abducted _husband_...
Date: December 27 2019 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Bedtime
More please.
Later,
Diesel
Date: December 23 2019 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Bedtime
A thought occured to me while reading about the effects of the alcohol he had drunk. Alcohol can act as a catalyst, changing chemical compositions of drugs taken. Like drinking alcohol and taking barbituates result in a new chemical compond rather than the two drugs simply emphasizing the effects of each other, a new (usually deadly) chemical is formed.
Perhaps the addition of alcohol to his body under the influence of both the "down" and "up" could immunize his body from any future exposure / consumption of the drugs. With more "down" than "up" in his body, maybe he could shrink further while he sleeps.
If her were to become immune to the effects of the drugs, and only able to access the two drinks he left himself on the tray on the floor (which no longer have an effect on his size), then his wife could find the rest on the counter and sell them to restore her finances so she could focus on raising her daughter and taking care of her baby sized husband. I would think the company that made the "down" and "up" drug would pay a handsom profit to her for returning it rather than let a rival company research the formula.
Just some thoughts. I really can't wait for the wife to find out and see how she treats him.
Only complaint, again, very long paragraphs make it harder to read. Other than that, GREAT!
Author's Response:
I never considered the effects of alcohol! That's an interesting point..
The rest of the drug, the wife's reaction, and some involvement with the company will eventually show up, there's plans for those for sure!
And thank you for the comment about paragraphs. The lack of dialogue makes it harder to break up, and I keep writing longer paragraphs in return. I will try to break them up even more in future chapters.
Date: December 22 2019 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Bedtime
He's going to be in big trouble. Great story.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Dig a man a hole, he has a hole for a day. Teach a man how to use a shovel, he'll be digging himself into the hole for the rest of his life.
Date: December 20 2019 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A Relaxing Evening
Will he be punished for wearing shoes on the couch? Loved his leaving the remote where adults can reach it. Nanny cam is interesting. Hope the wife comes home soon. Will he encounter his Aunt or a neighbor. Or maybe his wife's sister?
Loving it,
Diesel
Author's Response:
It's one thing having a fantasy, another seeing it become reality, with all its challenges. Who knows what's in the future!
Date: December 20 2019 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Mockery of Her
He is a child. The light switch was an excellent idea. Of course it would be in a different spot now.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Yep. Just a small difference from what he was used to.
Date: December 20 2019 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Shrinking Tea
Id love to see his wife destroy the tea bags trapping him at that size. I'd personally like to see him as tall as her waist.
The description of his shrinking was excellent. Really well done.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Who knows how she'll respond when she finds out!
Date: December 20 2019 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Home Alone
Great story idea. You have set the story up well. Will he answer his wife with Yes Ma'am to show her proper respect. Will she treat him like the child he has become and spank him over her knee for any discipline?
Excellent start,
Diesel
Author's Response:
He's still mentally an adult. The wife's reaction and response to all of this... we just have to wait and see!
Date: December 20 2019 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 4 - A Relaxing Evening
The ongoing suspence is a killer. Will she catch him and when???
My only complaint, the paragraphs need to be broken up into smaller paragraphs so it's easier to read; otherwise very gripping and well written.
Author's Response:
So, I went back to Chapter 4, and realized that you are right. The ultra big paragraphs could use some breaking up. I will edit it. Thank you for catching that.
Date: December 18 2019 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Mockery of Her
Being infant / baby sized to a full sized woman is a popular fantasy; just look up "Baby Sit" fetish videos.
I saw a comic strip years ago where a female employee had to pass off a shrunken male employee as her own baby to the companys' boss to account for the maternity time she took off.
I myself have a yet to be published story of a secretary that makes her boss and an employee {who stumbles upon their situation} into babies / small men.
My only concerns are that John will not reduce his size further and not realize he wants to be a sissy girl.
I am hopeful that Johns' wife returns home, for what ever reason, and catches him being a shrunken prissy, and perhaps insisting that she has had enough and shrinks him even smaller.
Another possibility, John drinks more "down" tea and accidentally spills the "up" drink over, causing him to shrink further and eventlually be found small and sissy by his wife.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Yes, babysitting, age regression or mock age regression stuff is definitely very popular. I am trying to toe the line between that and a more "serious" wish fulfilment story. As for what happens next, I cannot spoil just yet!
Date: December 18 2019 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Home Alone
Humm... I like how you described John awkwardness towards his own heigh. It's not a fetish for tall womans, but a feeling of awkwardness in regards to his own body... very interesting and unique.
The title also got my attention. I like stories that pry deep into family affairs using the size as premise for change or discovery.
I will be waiting for the next chapter.
Thanks for sharing. It's a good start :)
Author's Response:
Thanks. I thought I'd take it for a more introspective spin. Of course, he's still very much a fetishist about some stuff (as you can probably tell), but it's fun exploring his thoughts and past experiences. Glad you enjoyed it so far!