Date: October 30 2023 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
These are really fun ideas. I'd love to see a continuation with more detail. The ideas are great but I'd love to see the scenes fleshed out more.
[Report This]Date: October 30 2023 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Glad to see this one is back! Love the concept of it. I really hope you continue it as I’m curious to see how the potential couples content goes.
I could be misremembering but wasn’t there other chapters to this? I’ve revisited it over the years and thought there was some other parts. Regardless I can’t wait for more!
EDIT: Deleted my old review because I accidentally rated it a 5/10 instead of 5/5
[Report This]Date: April 11 2023 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
So many names thrown about in that last chapter, it is a bit hard to keep tract of who is whom.
Love your story so far, and am interested to read where it goes.
You asked in a reply to my previous comments if I would be interested "If you want to try to do a co-author thing or a sequel let me know."
First, I have a lot of time constraints, and can NOT commit to a lot of devotion to any story. Any collaboration would have to take place over an undetermined amount of time I can not commit to.
Second, the subject matter of such a collaboration would have to be determined between us; and most likely be altered as the story progresses.
With this in mind, and with your agreement, such a LONG TERM story would be a nice project to proceed with you.
Go to https://www.deviantart.com/hertoering and write me a message about the type of story you wish to write, including subject matter and participants.
Let's see where any collaboration goes from there.
Date: December 28 2019 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 4 (Giantess' POV)
Great story so far; but it would be nice if the people in the town who dug the hole and ended up at Tanya's breast would eventually be able to harvest her sweat and dead skin cells as their only, yet substainable food and water source, thus surviving off of her tit.
Hopefully Tanya shrinks other cities to adorn her breasts, perhaps even one or two between her toes or in her ass-crack.
I know I mentioned it before, but a city squnched up under one of her breasts, where her chest meets her ribs (think bra underwire) and kept in darkness breathing in stale, sweaty air.
Perhaps she could creat portholes connecting the cities, so the inhabitants could experience her different body parts? That would be great if they all had to travel to the city / cities between her toes or in her butt crack for toejam or ass-crack filth to eat.
Keep it going. Excited to read where this goes.
Author's Response:
Hi: Thank you for the review. Chapter 5 is foreshadowing that much of your suggestions are to come; you have great ideas with this.
If you want to try to do a co-author thing or a sequel let me know.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2019 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
I forgot to leave a rating, and another detail, maybe a more extensive description of Tanya would be nice
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review and rating! I plan on doing a chapter from Tanya's perspective- hopefully that will add some description.
She is also based on a IRL girl I knew in College- and the protagonist is based on me.
Date: December 27 2019 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hi!, I must say this is an impressive story... I like the fact that Tanya is carefree and cares a little about the city on her massive tit, ir would be a great idea if she would start shrinking even more cities (I'd like to write something from the perspectivee of some of the people on those cities) to moreparts of herbody , until she has a little mankind of her own to master. It's a great job, please keep it up :D
Date: December 16 2019 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice! The only difference I personally would have made, but it is afterall your story, is that the town would be located either deep within Tanyas' cleavage or beneath one of her breasts {where her bras' underwire is under her tits}.
Does the forcefield allow the fragrance of Tanyas' breast, especially her sweat permiate the towns' air? Will Tanya shrink another town for her other tit?
Interested to read where this story goes.
Author's Response:
I like those ideas! It would be hot (both literally and figuratively) to live in a crevice between or beneath one of her boobs, where it would be dark and humid under her domination. Right now the town is located about half way down the inner slope of her titty so she controls our access to light.
I do intend that scents and moisture permeate the forcefield and that will come up in later chapters.
Thank you for your support!