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Reviewer: Deelann Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2021 5:56 PM Title: Trampled

I love to play MTG and D&D!

I loved the foot play. Eating the spider 🕷 was huge turn off.

I know that the text editor on this site can be frustrating but I was hoping that when you post a story you'll review it first. It would be nice to see consistent new paragraphs made when switch from narrative to dialog and back. It really helps the reader.

I love your level of detail.

Great job Ruby!

Reviewer: tinyguy33 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2021 2:43 PM Title: Trampled

I love a fresh take on the shrinking 'magic' genre, and this story is great! Lots of detail, and the gimmic is fun and new. On the smut end, great description and detail. As a personal taste thing, I don't enjoy the bug stuff but it's not the focus for too long. I'd like to see more MTG games, I can see a Yu-Gi-Oh style battle format, with giant consequences. Great job.

Reviewer: iamjimmyjamesgreen1288 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2019 10:31 PM Title: Trampled

An amazaing story! Very impressed. You should write more often. 

 



Author's Response:

Haha thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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