[Report This]Date: November 25 2019 6:44 PM Title: First Test
I love ideas like this. The pool really gives Agatha a lot of options to have fun and explore a lot of potential in this story.
I really enjoy the bit where she doesn't seem to care about the tiny civilization in her scrying room. I hope we get to hear more about them along with the adventures she is about to have. Also really like the description of Agatha, great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Agatha will have many more adventures in the future, and as for the civilization she stole, I think they have one or two stories left in them.
Date: November 13 2019 12:37 AM Title: First Test
Interesting concept this scrying pool.
It has potential for a lot of stories and fun stuff!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah, I've got a lot of ideas and half-ideas for it swirling around, waiting to be turned into stories.
[Report This]Date: November 09 2019 12:28 AM Title: Conquest
But now she lost her beautiful scrying pool. But at least the city has a great new leader. I hope they approximate her.
Also nice too see that somebody else also thinks just shrinking stuff is missing some magic factor.
Thx for writing
Author's Response:
An entire kingdom to do her bidding is better than a scrying pool, I'd say. If she wants, they can build her another one!
Magic makes the world go round, I always say.
You're welcome, and thanks for reviewing!
Date: November 08 2019 7:17 PM Title: Conquest
I really like this story, and the concept of an ALL POWERFUL WOMAN / GODDESS. That said, I notice that Agatha's rule is noted as unchallenged; what if another woman / sacred virgin rose to counter Agatha?
Years ago I wrote a story (unposted) of a preitess and a group of celestial virgins who shrink a massive invading army and place them within the sunken floor of the preitess's great hall, before her throne. The Virgins go off destroying the massive, shrunken army in various ways. You reminded me of that story, perhaps I'll revisit it and post it.
Great story line. BRAVO!
Author's Response:
There will be challenges to Agatha's reign, but those are stories for another time.
You should finish that story! I originally wanted the force that confronted her to be much larger, but couldn't justify how an entire field army would assemble within a couple minutes.
Thanks!
Date: November 04 2019 6:30 PM Title: First Test
Nice! Very Nice!
Agatha "the Black Hearted" sounds like the type of self-absorbed Giantess that defines the unaware genre even if she does destroy tinies knowingly. It's her complete detachment from human suffering and indifference to her victims that makes her such an incredibly unaware Giantess.
I really like the fact she desposited Marcus on her floor just to ignor his existance.
The scrying pool dimension play is great. Perhaps she could reroute some of the exscape portals of "thieves and assassins" to positions of subservience to Agatha {e.g. exit portals between her toes, in her stomach, on her clit, or up her butt as possibilities should you so choose}.
Author's Response:
I really appreciate the enthusiasm!
The idea that her victims are "human" is something that barely even registers to Agatha, as becomes clear later. They're just a means to an end for her. I went in a different direction with it than your suggestion, but I think you'll like how it ends up anyway.
[Report This]Date: November 04 2019 11:41 AM Title: First Test
Aww, the poor little village is gone. Now she can't get to know it :(
Well, at least the village has been wiped out by a powerful witch and not by a teenager throwing dirty socks throug the portal like in that other story.
Let's hope the tiny and the goddess can be friends.
Also, thank you for writing!
Author's Response:
Really, that village got off easy compared to what'll happen to other towns. Witches can be quite powerful, and their agendas are secrets.
And thank YOU for reviewing!
Date: November 03 2019 11:04 PM Title: First Test
A very good story! I can't wait to see where it will go next!
Author's Response:
Thanks! You won't have to wait long.
Date: November 03 2019 1:37 PM Title: First Test
Well certainly a great start.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hopefully it has a good middle and end, too.