Date: November 06 2019 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very well done, would love some more darker parts maybe also some anus and ass "vore" parts.
Date: October 25 2019 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well done! I really enjoyed the way you portrayed Sam. I could really picture her being a powerful CEO. I also liked how you described in detail the fates of each family member.
And I'm glad my story 'Shrinking with the Boss' provided you with some inspiration. Shrinking around an already powerful woman is a pretty enticing thought.
Looking forward to your next story.
Take care!
Author's Response:
I'm really glad to hear that you enjoyed how I portrayed her. I tried to do my best, without spending toooooo much time on filler. I know a lot of people wish to get into the good stuff. I'm happy to know that I described that well enough. I'm not much into butts, breasts, or vore, but I want to offer those who do enjoy those things, something they can appreciate.
I really do love that story, and you're absolutely right. I can't wait to see how it continues to develop.
Thanks again, and you take care too!
Date: October 21 2019 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Normally I would say continue on and tell us all about Nathan spending his life eating Sam's toe jam; but it's great just the way it is.
To bad James was burried face down in Sam's toenail polish rather than face up so he could survive there for a week or two staring up at her.
Nicely done!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I would have if I was younger, but honestly, I lose motivation quickly, so I plan on doing one-shots exclusively, so I never leave anybody hanging.
As for James' ending, I see what you're saying, but instead, he's forced to only see her nail, forced to be one with her foot. I kind of think he'd almost prefer that.
Thanks again for the review!
Date: October 21 2019 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the story
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you loved it!
Date: October 19 2019 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent!
Author's Response:
Thanks!