[Report This]Date: December 04 2019 6:25 AM Title: Consummating
Great story, only wishing the bullying before and the interaction after Meredith got tamed would be described some more for the contrast. But i really enjoyed reading it.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I had to short the description a bit to keep the story moving along at a good clip. They'll be back though, and he's not done getting bullied.
Date: October 21 2019 2:02 PM Title: Consummating
Now, I understand you have to make up for all that happened to the tiny guys in your other stories, but this is too much luck for a single person, I hope it's enough to make him burst ;)
Author's Response:
It's true what they say, some guys really do have all the luck!
Date: October 12 2019 1:23 AM Title: Consummating
Only just got around to commenting after I finished this a while ago, I enjoyed the nice change of pace in tone after a couple of darker stories that I had been reading. Meredith's belittiling attitude perfectly leverages our expectations, we're obviously well aware of what your giantesses are capable of :p MC's willing embrace of her is something we often see in slow shrinks where they can't help themselves but not as often in shorts like this so there isn't really time and space to develop him as an individual really. Only reason I bring it up is because i read you intend to have these two resurface, which prompted both the question of what you might do with him and it also invited the idea that Meredith might eventually learn to grow as some of your other characters do :D
A worthy story, my thanks for it!
Author's Response:
I appreciate you taking time to come back and review this!
Earlier I said that this idea hit me while I was working on Making the Grade: what if I did something with a similar concept, but a completely different arc? After reading this I realized I kind of inverted everything I've done going back to the very beginning! I have a couple ideas of what I want to do with them that I'll need to flesh out a bit before I can get to work, but I'll tease the ideas by saying that there's more than one bully in school, Meredith wants to go to a school dance "alone," and there'll be a crossover with one of my other characters. Unfortunately, I don't think she'll be growing, since character-wise she has no need; her tiny boyfriend makes her feel like a giantess already :)
[Report This]Date: October 05 2019 9:06 AM Title: Consummating
So sweet.. That Meredith, now everybody will know that she's Really NOT a 'Mean' Girl. how will she ever face everone back at school? ;)
Nice work. you we're really walking a tight-rope there in the first few chapters, I was hoping that you could hold on to it... and, you did an excellent prolong of the fascination between the two. Even with the secret coming out - she still didn't eat him! Lol!
Nice Work at blending their opposite personalities and bringing everything togehter so nicely!
I will have to check out the rest of your stories!
Author's Response:
She'll figure something out, she's a smart girl. There might be people who have something to say about it though ;)
Thank you! I've written enough stories where the shrunken person gets killed in some way at the end, I figured I could let them win one for a change.
As usual, I encourage everyone, but especially my new readers, to check out and review my other stuff when they can.
Date: October 04 2019 7:32 PM Title: Demonstration
Ah, the Tsundere, a classic. For some it's cliche, for me, the reason it's so common, is because there's always a compelling storyline waiting to be tapped. I've always liked the Hey Arnold! kind of stories where the bane of the character's existence ends up loving them the most.
Admittedly, I'm not a fan of first-person, but that's more of a stylistic preference. It does this story credit, and keeps the pace going. Definitely, if there's going to be a future installment, it would be fun to see things from Meredeth's perspective.
Author's Response:
Or, as part of their bully/victim relationship, she came to appreciate him after she started bullying him, and it became a post-fact justification for her actions. She doesn't like him any less, it just developed once she started spending a lot more time around him.
I really like the first-person perspective, since it gives the reader an opportunity to put themslves in the protagonist's situation. If I were to do one from Meredith's perspective, which wouldn't be the first one but a bit down the road, it'd still be first-person as the giantess in the situation. Then at least readers, whom I presume are mostly in the shrunken man role, can put themslves into the role of her tiny man as she looks down on him. Honestly I can see that having legs, enough for a story or two at least.
[Report This]Date: October 04 2019 1:58 PM Title: Consummating
Aww, these two are so cute. I'm almost sad the story ends here, but it's better to end on a high point I guess.
At the beginning of the story, didn't expect Meredith to be also kind of liking him back. I almost expected Meredith to simply suddenly decide to crush him. But the way things turned out is way better. Fact.
I now imagine Meredith as his huge guardian angel, ready to waltz over anyone that tries to bully him, because that's of course Merediths task.
I hope to see them back somewhere and I would also like to thank you again for writing the story!
Author's Response:
I got the idea for this while I was writing Making the Grade; I wanted to do something with a similar skeleton, but a totally different outcome.
I think you said it earlier, Meredith's claimed him now, and if anyone wants to bully him they have to deal with her first.
They'll definitely be back in a couple months, don't worry.
[Report This]Date: October 04 2019 10:30 AM Title: Consummating
And that is the conclusion....of the first arc. I like how despite Meredith being a strong willed and confident woman she's still has a vulnerable side.. Also very Noble of our hero will go through whatever it takes to make it work with her. I look forward to seeing what the future holds.
Author's Response:
It's an extreme version of the truism that inside every bully is a scared, insecure person, really. The protagonist helps her feel strong, and now that he's there to hold her up she doesn't need to use violence quite as much.
As far as he knows she's the only person who can give him exactly what he wants, and he'd already walk through fire for her. Their future is going to be quite interesting.
Date: October 03 2019 11:18 PM Title: Plaything
Awwww, I love Meredith! And I want to be her tiny boyfriend instead!
This chapter was hot in some places when it wasn’t too busy being adorable. You don’t usually write gentle giantesses, but when you do, they’re the BEST kind!
“Yeah, don’t worry, I see you little guy! In fact, I only have eyes for you.” Melts my heart! :)
Author's Response:
If everyone had someone like Meredith I think we'd all be better off!
I prefer to think of mine as gentle* giantesses, because they like to play with their tinies and sometimes they can get rough.
[Report This]Date: October 03 2019 8:28 PM Title: Demonstration
Holy shit this was the cutest fucking shit ive read in a while, this was like a very need palate cleanser from some of the other stuff ive read on this site so thank you for this. I would love these characters returning at some point but im looking forward to what else you write next.
Author's Response:
Haha, my work has been called a lot of things, but I think this is a first for cute. They'll be back for sure, I had so much fun writing them I couldn't close the book on them yet, but their further adventures are better suited for other stories. My other stuff may not be as cute, but I hope you enjoy it all the same. : )
[Report This]Date: October 03 2019 3:51 PM Title: Consummating
A surprisingly heartwarming story that has reached its finale all too soon. It does, however, showcase the advantages of write-it-before-you-publish-it approach.
All the best and keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Their story is far from over : ) I just didn't want this to become a bloated, never-ending slog, and that was as much as I had planned. They will definitely be featured in future stories, though they'll probably be shorter.
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope what comes after lives up to this one for you.
[Report This]Date: October 03 2019 9:05 AM Title: Demonstration
Finally got around to reviewing this and can definitely say that these two are cute together. Glad to see Meredith burst out of her cruel shell and show her true and playful personality to the protag. I'm wondering how they go public with their relationship once the weekend is over. I imagine our hero will fabricate some sort of story.
Author's Response:
Playful giantesses are the absolute best, so I try to make mine mostly playful with a hint of mean. They'll be able to go public with it just fine :)
[Report This]Date: October 03 2019 9:02 AM Title: Plaything
You're really killing it with these new stories!
I'm enjoying the chemistry you've established with this pair. I'm also glad that they ended up having mutual feelings for each other and I hope things end well for both of them.
The interactions are descriptive and detailed. The foot/toe play you did this chapter was great, but the part last chapter with the making out plus the gradual shrinking was amazingly done.
Looking forward to seeing how this one plays out.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I put a lot of effort into descriptions and making conversations seem "real," so it feels good when someone goes out of their way to compliment me on it.
Date: October 02 2019 2:11 PM Title: Demonstration
Yessss, it's a thing!
The teasing really was leading up to a dopey (but ultimately still teasing) confession! AWESOME STUFF! Can't wait for the next chapter, gonna have to check out your other stories in the mean-time.
Author's Response:
If you think about it, she actually confessed twice, she just had to play it off as a cruel joke the first time ; )
I encourage you to go read (and review!) all my stuff, especially if you like this one.
[Report This]Date: October 02 2019 11:57 AM Title: Demonstration
I normally don't comment much on stories just because...Well I don't haha. But you've been doing very good with this. The demeaning dialogue from Meredith is both very hot and smug but also flows pretty naturally. Helps the rest is well written too.
You keep teasing me with those more micro sizes too haha, but color me impressed. Can't wait to see where you go with this one.
Author's Response:
Well, thanks for breaking your no-commenting streak! I appreciate getting feedback on stuff, it's really the only "payment" i get for this. Meredith is amazingly smug, but I think that naturally comes with the giantess superiority complex.
Micro sizes are the best : ) Glad you're looking forward to more!
Date: October 02 2019 9:55 AM Title: Confessing
Yes! I’m so happy my prediction came true!
Meredith’s excitement about having a boyfriend (and a tiny, doll-sized boyfriend at that) is honestly super adorable. :3
I love how she just couldn’t stop kissing him!
Also, my favorite size is Minikin, and I usually don’t like anything smaller, but Micro(1”- .5”) is ok given the circumstances. Micro is the absolute minimum for me, like the size of her fingertip. Are you planning on going any smaller? I kind of hope not. I mean, she can’t really interact with him at that size without hurting him. However, I am excited to see if we get some giant girlfriend foot/toeplay. I can tell Meredith would be really good at teasing with it! Like, “I’m you’re girlfriend now, so... how about you give me a foot rub? And while you’re at it, make love to my toes!” Now that I think about it, Minikin is really good for that, but Micro would let him really get between her toes! ;) Sorry, that’s a lot of personal stuff I’d like to see, but it’s your story! Do whatever you want!
I love this story! And after this chapter, I’m already in love with their romance! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Yeah, she really digs him! I was honestly split between her being into it and using it as a weapon against him, but there was so much sexual tension in how she pinned him this time I just went with it.
Micro is my favorite size, because it just is. It makes mouthplay easier, and the power dynamic is hilariously unbalanced without having to use tweezers. I've done a good amount of stuff at nano, but that's not for this story. Meredith wouldn't like him that small, and nano POV is SUPER hard to write. I'm not really a foot guy, more into socks/stockings as far as that goes, so sad to say there won't be that exact thing, but there'll still be a lot in that realm.
Thanks! It's drawing to a close soon, but what's left is very content-rich. Btw, based on your reviews of other stories, I think our origins, if you will, are fairly similar.
Date: October 02 2019 5:37 AM Title: Demonstration
I knew it, I was right! She's in love with her victim!
Author's Response:
Love might be a bit strong, but she's definitely crushing!
[Report This]Date: September 30 2019 10:32 PM Title: Legs
Ooh, rampaging through the city, I like that. But how will she ever do that when she keeps missing her extra lunches? How will she ever get big and strong?
But anyway, it's nice that our protagonist and Meredith finally spend some more time together. I only thing he should walk around the school a bit more like he is actually trying to hide from here to not raise any suspicion. Or tell Meredith of course.
Also, thank you for writing and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Unfortunately, I think Meredith's quite finished with her natural growth, so she won't be rampaging through cities any time soon. Not like that will stop her from menacing our protagonist, though.
I think you'll really like the next chapter!
Date: September 30 2019 6:35 AM Title: Demonstration
I'm more and more convinced this is actually her way to show that she's in love with him <3
Author's Response:
She wants to just hug him until he goes pop!
Date: September 29 2019 4:55 PM Title: Demonstration
They seem to have a co-dependence streak going on between them. If their relationship continues to develop in a submissive, rough, but not overly violent fashion; I wonder if we'll see some genuine affection and protectiveness from Meredith. To qoute Mean Girls "It's only funny when I say that". A scene where she lets him slip into danger from others and has to rescue her "toy" could hint or reveal if this relationship is one they can both enjoy and develop, or if she's one bad day away from snuffing him out for her own satisfaction.
Author's Response:
That's a pretty solid read on their relationship! If Meredith saw someone else trying to horn in on her territory she would get very upset and turn her wrath on them before going back to her favorite toy. As to how it develops, you'll just have to keep reading to find out.
Date: September 29 2019 12:53 PM Title: Enlightenment
I can't seem to find it atm, so even if it's embarassing I'll ask - was it you who wrote a story where the gigantic bully saves her victim from an abusive parent? Because if it was, there's at least some hope that the "shock them both" in the description doesn't turn horribly bad for him, otherwise I kinda feel she's going to get a lot more control than she already has (assuming she doesn't just squish him from the surprise).
PS
It seems I have two stories with a tiny fearing what happens when SHE finds out he likes being tiny (the other one is "tests and trials" by LittleLee)... Xmas came early this year!
Author's Response:
I didn't write that one, but I remember the one you're talking about. All I can do without giving too much away is suggest you keep reading, but I don't think I need to encourage you to do that.