Date: September 27 2019 7:22 AM Title: Separation
Things didn't turn out as I expected and I fell a little sorry for the Mr. Tiny. But, your writing is very enjoyable and you were fast to upload everything.
Thank you. I will read more of your stories :)
Author's Response:
Things didn't go as well as Mr. Tiny hoped either, but that's often how life goes. I'm glad you'll read my other stories though, they're quite good if I don't say so myself.
[Report This]Date: September 25 2019 1:37 PM Title: Separation
I was rooting for her to keep him, even if I knew it was the unlikely option, so dammit!
That being said, wow! I hope that the last three words in chapter seven mean we can wait for Mr Tiny, second of his name
Author's Response:
He was rooting for that too at the end, but when she didn't he was devastated. Just crushed.
I'm glad you liked it! I'm not saying she'll be back, but I'm not saying she won't be, either. She's going off to college, and there's a sorority that'll fit her just fine.
[Report This]Date: September 25 2019 12:05 PM Title: Probation
Nice story. Seems like Jessica stole his heart and then crushed it. Such a pity he didn't move to college with her, but oh well.
Thank you for writing! It's good to see a story by you again.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I was wondering when you'd show up.
Alas, the star-crossed love between a man and the woman who shrinks him to extort favors is doomed to end tragically.
[Report This]Date: September 23 2019 3:48 PM Title: Graduation
You're doing an awesome job with this one!
Jessica is a great character to have as the giantess. She's highly playful and mischievious, but can be cruel when she wants to as well. And yet she never seems incredibly mean about it, making me wonder how things will develop now that she is officially done with high school.
You're also pumping chapters out super quickly. Did you finish the story before you began posting it?
Author's Response:
Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing Jessica, so I'm glad people are enjoying her. I went in with the idea that she doesn't want to hurt him, she just wants him to do whatever she wants.
Yeah, I finished it before posting. I realized the reason I had so many unfinished stories was I got burnt out, distracted, or discouraged halfway through, so if it's all done before it goes life that shouldn't be an issue.
Date: September 23 2019 2:45 PM Title: Probation
Love this giantess! She’s playfully fun and just a tiny bit cruel. So much fun to read! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks! That's my favorite kind of giantess, so most of them are like that.
Date: September 23 2019 2:19 PM Title: Homework
I'm at chapter 5, and I'm not sure how I managed to read until now without commenting.
So, here it is: unless chapter 6 really sucks, this story is easily the BEST you've ever written.
Better than many of them combined actually (and I usually like them), but part of it may be because it fits my tastes better than others.
That you're writing chapters faster than I'm writing comments is also a nice bonus :D
Author's Response:
Thank you!! Would you believe I was unsure how this story would be received when I started posting it?
[Report This]Date: September 23 2019 6:20 AM Title: Probation
I love all the imagery in this, and in your other stories. Even in bits that aren't my thing, there's something to like in the writing. Like the line about the inside of the Ugg boot looking like a well decorated in the 70s.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I try to make my descriptions as vivid as possible, so that people can feel like they're really "there" and help them imagine it.
Date: September 22 2019 10:32 AM Title: Relapse
Very intrigguing. I can't quite pin out Jessica intention and real personalitty. If it was just for the grades and letter, most of what she is doing is unnecessary. And she keeps bringing up the idea that Mr. Thompson is attracted to her her in a romantic/sexual way, while her own unnecessary actions are the ones really reflecting such attraction.
Seeing how everything played out so far, I don't think you planned Jessica to just be a sidistic evil torturer. For some reason she wants to get close to Mr. Thompson, a character that supposedly did nothing but annoy her. This promisses a very interesting dinamic and I am really curious to see where this is going, specially now that we will probably get to know more about Jessica ability and family.
Really good story with superb writing. Thank you for sharing it with us. Any idea when the next chapter might be up? I am dying here to know what happens next XDD
Author's Response:
Jessica's a real tough nut to crack, isn't she? She's the girl that every guy wants and she knows it. Could be she's a little hot for teacher, could be she's just fucking with him. She's definitely got a mean streak, though.
Thank you! The next chapter will be up later today, then there are two more after that.
Date: September 21 2019 3:02 PM Title: Probation
Great story.
Any time a story has that initial shrunken recognition, I get chills. This guy looking up, realizing dawning on him, it just takes me there, you know?
I also really appreciate that he isn't perverted. This isn't some guy stammering about foot worship, this isn't him going, 'Boy oh boy, I wish that beautiful girl would give me attention.'
It's a someone not wanting this to happen, but having to deal with the consequences anyways.
Great writing! :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I really appreciate it! If you like that aspect, you should check out my other stories, and that's not just shameless self-promotion. The vast majority of them are about someone shrinking despite no desire to and having to deal with it.
I also really like the first few moments after the guy shrinks, looks up, and realizes what he's in now. It's a powerful moment, and a good opportunity to flex your ability to describe just how enormous and powerful she is compared to you now. That's why most of my protagonists start out normal-sized and then get shrunk, it's an opportunity to write that scene, and give a sense of the initial confusion of suddenly being tiny.
Thanks for reading!
Date: September 21 2019 2:41 PM Title: Probation
Really enjoying the story so far! I echo the butt comment, she seems like she would really play it up. Do you know if there will be insertion? Whether it be the butt or her swallowing him? Either way, keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
The story's already written, and I don't think there'll be quite enough butt stuff for you, but I hope that doesn't deter you from reading further! I appreciate every view and review that I get.
Date: September 20 2019 10:33 PM Title: Probation
First of all, I just want to say loved every second reading this story! I do hope you continue it and eventually see Jessica do more with her teacher.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Jessica isn't done with her teacher yet, there are more things she'll need before the year's out, and she knows just how to get them.
Date: September 20 2019 12:39 AM Title: Probation
Loving this story so far. Looking forward to more sensory details and hoping to see Jessica use her sweaty feet to teach him a lesson.
Author's Response:
I appreciate the encouragement! I can assure you, you'll get at least some of what you're after with this story.
Date: September 19 2019 10:37 AM Title: Probation
Love Jessica. She gave him a chance by only reducing him to 4 feet. He stupidly refused. Now he's bug sized. I'd love to be engulfed in her pretty hand. What a fun story so far. Hope he changes her grade and then she reduces him again and drops him in an aquarium with small lizards in her science class.
Author's Response:
Jessica definitely has some plans for him, don't worry.
[Report This]Date: September 18 2019 5:13 PM Title: Probation
Great stuff.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: September 18 2019 3:03 PM Title: Probation
Great start, can't wait to see where it leads!
Author's Response:
Thank you! It's going places, I assure you.
[Report This]Date: September 18 2019 2:54 PM Title: Probation
Great start! Looking forward to some butt related content!
Author's Response:
Thanks! It'll be a bit, butt it'll come.