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Reviewer: Amista6 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2019 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 3: "The Day the Klown Kried"

I loved how she tricked him and I loved the ending for his final fate.  I'm surprised you havent got more reviews, since becoming a buttplug isnt common in stories but highly sought after.

I like the idea of those villians because you don't hear much about them.  there's multiple versions of them too so that leaves you some choices. arrowverse, DC animated universe, comics, movies...

A few ideas.

Batgirl could find him and try to help him. she brings him back to her room or personal batcave and keeps him in a fish tank or hamster cage etc for his safety. eventually she realizes theres no cure and offers to take care of him.  becuase of her character it could be hard to make her move beyond gentle, but they could fall in love and eventually become sexual partners or maybe he offers to massage her after a hard day of work?  Batgirl could enjoy backrubs or footrubs after her dayjob or a night in those batboots.  After months or years she might accidentally stop viewing him as a person and instead a loving pet.  theres also the unaware option of falling into her ass, breasts or pussy.  same for supergirl, black canary or any other hero.

Lois lane could at first be more interested in getting a news story, so she interogates him before helping, delaying as long as possible. maybe she gives him to her sister lucy lane, who is sometimes in the military. or to cat grant?

there are also hero/vigilantes that cross the line like huntress and  wonder woman has killed at least once before but only because she had to.

Talia al ghul would be merciless.  Lena Luthor could go a lot of different ways.

No matter what you come up with I'll be sure to read it!



Author's Response:

Thanks again for reading and reviewing! Wanted to add it in the last response, but couldn't edit it - but yes, I definitely wanted Harley to behave in that manner for the story. There are aware giantesses, and there are unaware giantesses. I wanted Harley somewhere in between, which to me meant a neglectful giantess - but in a playful way! I'm glad you enjoyed the ending to it, as well. I was worried it might get some hate from readers because Harley starts one way, then goes to another, and then another. However, to me, that's Harley. Keeps you guessing, but she has a method to her madness. She's not stupid, but she's alright with you thinking she is, as it disarms you. 

The Batgirl idea sounds great, but it's also something I did in the "Giantess Raven GF" story. Except, instead of Batgirl, it's Raven (of course). She finds a shrunken guy, tries to reverse the effects, continuously failing. They grow closer, and he basically becomes a familiar to her, and then something more. When I end up including heroes in this specific storyline, and I do want to include them, they would almost assuredly be gentle or unaware. There may be exceptions, like Huntress as you said, but by and large (heh) they'll either be gentle or unaware. Lois Lane would be interesting, and Talia would definitely get up to some interesting hijinks.

At the moment I know what I want the Gotham City Sirens to end up doing, but I don't know where I want the story to go beyond that initial setting change.

Reviewer: Amista6 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2019 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 2: "Adventures in Tiny Sitting"

The details in this chapter are incredible.  This is what it's like to be Harleys shrunken toy, day by day, like it's a normal thing to her.  Great work on all the little details and body exploration!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed all the details. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2019 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 3: "The Day the Klown Kried"

Don't have an easy way to respond, so just going to leave another review. 

 

Definitely like the idea of Killer Frost! Livewire would be fine, Copperhead is a little obscure for me personally but would still read it for sure. 

 

On the hero front, I could imagine a situation where Harley or Ivy caught Batgirl, and tied her to a chair, but before doing so dropped a tiny guy on the seat. Maybe they did this while she was unconscious so she feels him when she wakes up and has to be told what it is she is sitting on. She would believe Harley was lying until she saw Harley pull out and eat a tiny person herself, then realize that the more she struggled in her seat the more she was beating on the tiny man turned seat cushion. Then when she escapes or is saved she could find him and be gentle. Maybe it's even someone Batgirl happens to go to high school / college with. 

 

Anyway, just an idea, because I'm excited at the prospect of what you could pull off with heroes as well. Loving the stories so far though,so anything more would be great. 



Author's Response:

Killer Frost I definitely want in because, well, Popsicle tinies. Livewire I'm not sure what to do with her power in relation to tinies, but I definitely want someone with her personality in my works. Copperhead I want in because she's a hottie with a body and a snake theme. That's just a free in for vore right there, lol.

I think I could cook up some fun scenarios involving Harey/Ivy tricking Batgirl into sitting on and/or eating a tiny. Like put one in a dissolving capsule, force her to swallow without knowing what it was, then all of a sudden she feels a tickle in her stomach. Haven't put much thought into, but that's the first thing that comes to mind. Your idea of having her unknowingly sit on a tiny while tied to a chair would be really good, too. I especially like the idea of Batgirl having to care for a tiny, but recognizing him as someone from school. She would then have to operate under the assumption that he could one day be regrown, and if so then she has to protect her identity from him - while still having him under her care. A neat dynamic.

I don't want to throw any heroes at it too soon, though. Only because the more heroes are aware of the situation, the sooner they would be able to shut it down.

Right now, the plan going forward is to not focus on the DC-Licious stuff, but instead focus on Overwatch as well as an OC series I'm working. I've scripted some chapters and done some worldbuilding. Now I just need to think of a good look for the main character, an ice giantess, and I'll be set to start!

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2019 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: "Out of the Pan and Into the Cream"

Great conclusion, can't wait to see more! No idea who I expect to see next, though I still think an unaware hero (maybe Batgirl) could be a fun choice. 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it! I only have a rough idea where I want to go next with this, so not sure when I'll start up with new chapters. Villains on deck are Killer Frost, Livewire, and Copperhead. No concrete decisions on heroes, though if there are any they will be either gentle or unaware.

Thanks again for reading, reviewing, and rating!

Reviewer: Amista6 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2019 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: "Out of the Pan and Into the Cream"

I read your response from my review from your first gotham story and I'm excited to see where this goes!  If this guys ends up as Harleys butt toy I would be very happy. but i know whatever you write I'm going to enjoy it!

I also cant tell if Harleys pretending to be dumb or being honest in this chapter. you never know with her.



Author's Response:

Without giving too much away, I can at least confirm that of the 3 gotham stories I've done so far, this will have the most butt stuff (and butt stuffing).

I'm glad Harley's nature is being read as, well, hard to read. That's of course how she should be. Unpredictable and wild. 

Thanks for reading, reviewing, and rating!

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2019 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: "Out of the Pan and Into the Cream"

Another great one! Harley is definitely my favorite out of the girls so far. I wish John picked the bottom bunk, but I'll look forward to seeing the butt tag in later chapters. My favorite part of the Ivy story was when the tiny got shoved up Harley's asa, hope Harley's butt will be relevant again here. 



Author's Response:

"...hope Harley's butt will be relevant again here."

It will. Several times over.

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