[Report This]Date: December 26 2019 3:31 PM Title: Chapters 8 to 12 ... 8-29-19
Please do a part 2 with this, hopefully with some butt or inner-body stuff!
[Report This]Date: October 10 2019 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Kind of seemed like she was disinterested early on so I didn't like it at first, but wow the last post you made for this story was great.
Hey even if you don't continue to write, you've made tons of quality stories that will last. Good stuff, thanks.
Date: September 11 2019 5:15 AM Title: Chapters 8 to 12 ... 8-29-19
I love this story!
I created an account just so i could leave a review!
Can you please continue it! Its soo good. I love that you are now making him even smaller still! YES!
Also, I was wondering... could I pay you to write? I love it that much!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Nugget, for reading/commenting. I'm glad you like the story. I don't do pay to write, so that's not what I would do. Some people here may do that, like Jacksmith.
I don't plan to do anymore writing at the moment. You can read my other stories. They are all somewhat similar in style.
I really don't know if I will do more writing ever again. But if I do, I'll try to include at least one chapter of this story... because of your interest. Thanks again.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2019 7:01 AM Title: Chapters 8 to 12 ... 8-29-19
An interesting story. Enjoyed most of it - I found some of the interactions/behaviour a little chaotic, oten bouncing between moods too quickly or overreacting to events. Also it's all been a bit PG rated so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting. I get what you're saying about moods. That's on purpose for the excitement of it (not meant to be too realistic) yet it was a challenge and I also thought it was chaotic at times. I agree it is a bit PG to PG-13. The character's personality prevented going further.
Date: August 30 2019 3:48 AM Title: Chapters 8 to 12 ... 8-29-19
That was awesome. Really hoping you continue with this. Maybe he could even get super tiny in the FS1000 and she swallows it, giving him a fantastic voyage through her body.
Author's Response:
I thought of him being swallowed, but I'm more into mouthplay. But swallowing I like if just mentioned briefly. Thanks for commenting.
[Report This]Date: August 29 2019 10:16 PM Title: Chapters 8 to 12 ... 8-29-19
This was a great part one. Loved the ending with the reveal that he can get even smaller like the size of dust, or maybe smaller than that. No problem with my idea being put on hold. Now that I know more about the shrink ray I definitely think the thong part should be saved for when she puts him to the smallest size possible ;). Hope you decide to make a part two, great story:D
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your comments. I appreciate it.
Date: August 23 2019 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 7 ... 8-22-19
It seems like Stuart will be applying sunscreen to his sister's body on those hot summer days. Also, since he can't swim he will probably end up in the pool and need to be saved by Cassandra again. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks shaka for reading/commenting!
[Report This]Date: August 22 2019 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 7 ... 8-22-19
Great chapter and great set up for the bikini. Can’t wait to see if he gets trapped in the fibers of her thong string. If he’s lucky maybe she will sit down while he’s still stuck lol. Looking forward to more 10/10. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks Rise8! I put in some biikin stuff, but I felt the Cassandra character wouldn't allow too much thong fun. At least at this point in the story. I wanted to, but it seemed too early. Sorry about that. Thanks again for reading and commenting.
Date: August 22 2019 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looks like Stuart is unknowingly training his sister to be more accpeting of his attraction for her.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it looks like that. Thanks, Slacker28!
[Report This]Date: August 22 2019 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Again you deliver an awesome story!! So excited for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot, Yougts! I've started writing the next chapter, but it may be a week because of Internet access.
Date: August 21 2019 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 6 ... 8-21-19
Excellent work! I love how Cassandra taunts Stuart with the size comparisons. I am really hoping for some prolonged domination with her breasts. Maybe in her gold bikini by the pool, where even her nipples are larger that Stuart.
Author's Response:
Yes, her nipples can be larger than Stuart. If I can stay motivated, I'd get into some breast stuff. Thanks, shaka, for reading and commenting!
Date: August 21 2019 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
Esta es una de las mejores historias que he leído en todo este tiempo. Por favor continúa. Y que su hermana ahora si que sea sádica con él. Jeje
Author's Response:
Thanks Qemv! I don't speak Spanish, but put it into Internet translation:
This is one of the best stories I have read in all this time. Please continue. And now his sister is sadistic to him. Hehe
Glad you like it. Thanks for reading!
Date: August 19 2019 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, especially if there will be details about what it's like being dominated by Cassandra. I'm sure it isn't fun under her sock, and I would love to learn about how it smells down there.
Author's Response:
Thanks Medrinisoc! I'm not that much into feet, but thought it made sense here.
[Report This]Date: August 19 2019 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great so far, can't wait to see where it goes!
Author's Response:
Thanks wizard13335! I appreciate the comment.
[Report This]Date: August 18 2019 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Will you please continue?! This is super sexy! :D
Author's Response:
Glad you like it. Thanks, SilentStep.
[Report This]Date: August 18 2019 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 4 ... 8-17-19
So now he’s been caught and his plan is to shrink again, I love it haha. I can’t wait to see what his idea of impressing his sister will be, great chapter and story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/commenting. He wants the bikini pic so much he'll do anything.
[Report This]Date: August 17 2019 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 3 ... 8-16-19
Really good so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks Moti0n! Glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: August 16 2019 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
Glad to see another story from you. Can’t wait to see what’s happens next, Stuart seems to be getting smaller than your other stories. I hope he shrinks and gets caught then his sister traps him in her golden bikini thong string, win win for both lol.
Author's Response:
Thanks Rise8! Yeah, he's smaller... a cm this time. Thanks for the ideas.
Date: August 15 2019 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
This seems like a good setup for another one of your hot af stories. Very much looking forward to the next few chapters
Author's Response:
Thanks Rocketmangts! I try to make it interesting.
[Report This]Date: August 15 2019 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 2
So happy to see a new story. And is with a little sister this time!
Author's Response:
Thanks LJin! I appreciate it.