Date: October 16 2019 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love slow shrink and I absolutely love this story. Quite looking forward to where it goes from chapter 14, which brings up the question... Is 15 going to be posted after we are caught up to https://giantesscity.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=60&t=145215 / will it be posted here first?
Author's Response: I’ve been writing 15 for a while now. Once I upload 14 and we’re caught up, I will upload it everywhere at the same time. I only found giantessworld recently, so I figured I would start uploading my latest story, which I’d already begun on my deviantart and giantesscity. So to answer your question, the new chapters will be here, giantesscity, and on deviantart.
[Report This]Date: October 15 2019 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 12
Story aside, it's nice to see someone writing with such great attention to detail, including clothes. I have a complete mental image of Jackie, both from an objective viewpoint and Desmond's, their conversations feel like real conversations, and she seems like an actual, living character.
That said, the story rules too.
Date: October 11 2019 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 12
I absolutely love Jackie! The make-out scene was great, and I love how much she loves him. The way that she drops everything to take care of him, the fact that she actually apologized for being too domineering towards his mom, and the fact that she gets him clothes to feel like he’s still a man while getting all dolled up just for him! I think we all wish we were Desmond!
Every installment is worth the wait! You’re an awesome writer!
[Report This]Date: October 11 2019 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great work! Would love to see Vicky make a return at some point!
Author's Response: Thank you! Vicky will definitely be making an appearance very soon.
[Report This]Date: October 11 2019 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
Dude, it's simply one of the best story about GTS I've ever read, I read the 12 chapters straight, keep going dude.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! I don’t know if it’s one of the best, but I’m definitely glad you’re enjoying it!
Date: September 29 2019 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 11
Did anyone guess what the "explosive showdown" was going to be? (I didn't)
Author's Response:
I'm glad the story is somewhat unpredictable for you. Hopefully, my ideas are still fresh going forward.
Date: September 28 2019 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ok... wow.
I never talk about myself personally on this website, but that “armchair psychologist” moment from Jackie is the exact same explanation I have for this fetish. Crazy
I’m very, very, very excited to see where this goes! This story is one of the best on the site right now!
Keep it up!!! :)
Author's Response:
High praise! I honestly didn't think much of the "armchair psychologist" thing when I was writing this, but I'm glad it resonated with you. I remember feeling weird and awkward around girls that were taller than me when I was grade schooler. Of course, soon after that, I pretty much outgrew all the girls. I'm 6'3" nowadays, but my fetish for tall girls never went away with my growth spurts, that's for sure!
Date: September 27 2019 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
Foot boy? If this goes anywhere near where I want it to, you have my appreciation... ;)
Also, that exchange with Faith was really hot, she was my favorite from the time in Chapter 3 when we last met Jackie’s friends.
Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: September 26 2019 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Amazing story! Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: September 26 2019 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
Hey,
Like your other reviewers, I'm really enjoying the story and psyched to learn where it will go. While I liked Audrey, I'm rooting for Jackie at this point, especially as she complementary fetish angle develops.
The sister feels a bit over the top however, and the mother is inconsistent. I'm sure we haven't seen the last of them, but I'm not eager for them to return.
Anyhow, you do have me hooked, and I'm really looking forward to the next exciting episode.
Date: September 23 2019 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 9
Ok, so I almost want to go back on my previous review. Like, I’m honestly conflicted as to whether or not I should like Jackie or Audrey more, and honestly I’m fine with either one being the real love interest. I know that I’m probably supposed to dislike Jackie because she’s a little controlling and is probably the cause of his shrinking, but a part of me doesn’t care. ;)
Keep it up! I’m really intrigued to see where this story goes!
Date: September 22 2019 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
Now we're starting to see that Jackie has control over him, wants to isolate him, and is practically encouraging him to get as small as he can? This is going to some great places, and I can't wait for the next update. I just wish I could meet a woman like Jackie!
[Report This]Date: September 22 2019 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story, reminds me a little bit of my experiences with girls haha. This is definitely one of my favorite stories on this sit.
[Report This]Date: September 19 2019 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
So glad he's going back to college, can't wait to see how Jackie and Maggie react to him now! And I can't believe this after 8 great chapters, but I'm proud to be the first to give this the stars it deserves.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: September 19 2019 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 7
I just have to ask - did anyone inspire Audrey's phisique? Whenever I try to picture her I never know if she should have almost ridiculous proportions or she's just very well endowed in 50% of her body.
I have a soft spot for stories where the protagonist loses his mind over a woman (nvm two!),
so I'm not exactly objective, but this story is coming along really nicely.
Author's Response:
No one in particular inspired Audrey's physique. When I was writing the first chapter she was featured in, she wasn't really supposed to have a long term role. I just wanted to make Desmond's bus ride home a little claustrophobic (and sexy). Audrey blossomed into so much more than that, and I'm so glad that she did because she is one of my favorite characters to write now. I love writing Jackie too though, so I'm trying to find a good balance.
And you're right! Desmond is losing his mind over two women!
Really glad you're enjoying the story!
Date: September 19 2019 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 7
So I’ve changed who my favorite love interest is, but I think that was the point. ;)
I love Audrey’s character description. A big tall girl who’s thick without being fat. She’s also so playful and sexy. My favorite thing about her would have to be the fact that she is able to be so loving and genuinely caring while still totally teasing and even poking fun at his size. I love the idea of being a smaller guy with a bigger girl.
Part of me wants to see Desmond get smaller while in Audrey’s possession(like maybe even Minikin). I don’t know how you’re gonna resolve the shrinking in terms of Jackie’s role, but I’m excited to see it!
Keep it up! (And btw, if you did do some footplay, like I mentioned before, I’d love to see it with Audrey ;), as I’d love her to be the true love interest!)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like Audrey, and it's easy to see why. I wrote her to be super likable. As for Jackie, she still has a big role to play in this story (she is the title character after all). But of course, both women will have a role to play.
Date: August 13 2019 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
Yes! That last paragraph just made my day!
I can’t wait to see their relationship dynamic as he keeps shrinking, and I wanna see her meet his family. Part of me really, really wants Desmond to tell Jackie everything his sister has done, and I want it to lead to a full-on confrontation between Jackie, the girl who loves him, and Amanda, the bitch who treats him as sub-human.
Great writing, keep it up!
Date: August 08 2019 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
Awww, that kinda sucks!
I really liked their relationship, and if I were him, I would’ve stayed with my supportive, beautiful, soon-to-be-full-on-giantess-compared-to-me girlfriend instead of my abusive sister.
However, I know they’re not totally done, considering the title of the story.
Interested to see where you go with this!
Date: August 08 2019 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
Not sure what I expected, but that surprised me as well.