Date: August 05 2019 12:17 AM Title: Smelling Salts
I'm really enjoying the progression this story has taken so far. Would love to see some more foot related action, especially given that we haven't seen much with Ashley yet. Regardless, can't wait to see what happens next. Great job
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that you enjoy the story! I'll be adding more foot content in the upcoming chapters because I noticed that the past several chapers have been lacking. Stay tuned and thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: August 04 2019 9:50 PM Title: Out to Lunch
All I got to say is that this is an amazing story! I've really enjoyed it so far, amazing writing, and lots of butt lol Kind of hoping he fucks up with her and gets to be megans toy, but alexis is pretty amazing too then again u also got the caring sister
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you're enjoying the story! A lot of people seem to be on Team Megan thus far into the story haha. Stay tuned because I don't think anyone will be expecting where things will end up.
Thanks for reading!
Date: August 03 2019 5:11 AM Title: The Bedroom
Well, after ch. 18 and the new ch. 12 (memories), I must admit feeling much less simpathy towards Megan. In truth, I think she is worse than Alexis. She might say she cares for Max and doesn't really want to hurt anyone, but her actions tell otherwise and I can't imagine someone really fallen in love for her (to have sex does not equals to fall love - in my oppinion - and, for what I can see, she doesn't really care for being loved).
Really curious to see how you are going to play out her relationship with Max after this nightmare.
Author's Response:
I'm always happy to see that you've left a review! I'm thrilled to see that people find Megan to be an interesting character and I can promise that she is definitely a complicated character, who will continue to develop as the chapters come.
Stay tuned for more and as always, Thanks for reading!
Date: August 02 2019 1:52 AM Title: The Bedroom
I love your qriting style and I like where the story is going. I just hope that in the end, everything will turn out alright for Max. If you have any other stories that you have written that are similar to this, I would love to read them if you could provide a link.
Author's Response:
I'm very happy to hear that you've enjoyed the way that I write. This is in fact my first ever story, but add me to your favorite authors list because I have a couple more stories that I plan to get working on once I'm finished with this one.
Thank you for reading!
Date: August 01 2019 7:14 AM Title: Smelling Salts
Fantastic stuff! Any chance of the mother getting involved?
Author's Response:
It's possible. That isnt something that I am into and it probably won't come into the main story, but I think i can probably write up a chapter or two in the "flashback" sort of format.
Keep an eye on the story and see what I come up with!
Thanks for reading and I'm thrilled youve enjoyed it so far.
Date: August 01 2019 1:09 AM Title: Out to Lunch
I loved the anal vore and would love to see more
Author's Response:
That sort of thing is always a possibility in my writing :)
I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far. Thanks for reading!
Date: July 31 2019 11:27 AM Title: Ashley Plays Along
This one is going to be long. Sorry, but, I had this ideas yesterday and wanted to share. Glad that the reviews are helping, so here is another one :) Just a quick note before: Ashley = worst caretaker ever kkkkkkkkkkkkk
There are many ways to develop the story from here on. I see where you are going introducing the barista (Liz) and making Max durable. Most stories introduce a third part to play the love that will save the hero sanity at the end, the light of hope at the end of the tunnel. But, you can do exactly the opposite and use her as the road to the main character total despair. Let me elaborate.
Max hopes for a romantic relationship with a RP, but, what if she already has someone? Or what if this experience with Alexis ends up having consequences that separate Max even from the RP community? It's clear this isn't Alexis first RP torture, but, if they are humans, that is a crime and she would sooner or later getting caught. What if she knows something, like sideeffects from stress and depression on a RP, that the sisters don't know about? A side effect like shrinking even more! That could be the turning point for Megan and Ashley... when they find him, obviously kkkkkkkkkk
Now, for Max development. Alexis doesn't just want him to behave like a slave, this chapter made it clear she wants him to feel like a pice of shit... quite literally. So, when he is suffering, you could show his conscience and how he starts to rationalize the situation: "Oh Megan is evil with me? It's my fault for laughing at her BO and not understand her feelings. Oh Ashley goes along with Alexis? I deserve, for I am just a burden for them. Finally, at least, I am being able to please my sisters".
That way, his personality starts to warp and turning for the worst. Most don't want Max to be phsically hurt, me too, but, in my opinion, it's also necessary for the actions of the chracters to have meaning, consequences that can't be undone and that will make our protagonist even more dependent from his family and isolated from the rest of the world. So, shrinking even more is the logical answer.
Also, can't wait for Megan to realize she is being deceived and have all thrown at her face - that she is the cumplice of a crime, that she is a hypocrite and have no way to stop Max misery and demise, at least for the time being.
Once again, sorry for the long comments. Those are all the ideas I had before going to sleep yesterday and wanted to share. Thank you for creating this universe with wonderful characters.
Author's Response:
I dont want to spoil where things are going but I will say that it isnt in Max's nature to give up hope for a regular life. He might get beaten down and punished but in his heart he will always be fighting for his freedom. That being said, he is a smart enough man to know when to submit to the will of an angry or horny giantess.
As far as the barist goes, I do in fact plan on continuing to help develop that relationship and there will be definately be interaction between the two of them and some gigantic folks.
No need to apologize for leaving long reviews, as I very much appreciate the feedback. There's no guarantee that a review will influence the story, but I am always thinking about how things will progress so it doesnt hurt to try! Thanks for showing your support!
Date: July 29 2019 9:57 PM Title: The Road Trip
Most important: I would like to thank you, not only for the story, but for keeping updating almost daily and with such a high quality. Your imagination and skills are amazing. Please, keep it up. Hope my comments can, if not help, at least motivate you to keep going. Once again, thank you and don't be afraid to write what and how you like! Life is often boring and bound by rules. That is why fiction and art exist - to exercise our imagination, our freedom and have some good time!
I am betting my chips that you are not done telling us obout the past of Megan and Max, and that it plays a big role in who she is now and how she really fells. A good way of doing that would be to show her thoughts and actions in the many phases Max go when shrinking. How she fells about it. For example: guilty (she did wish for him to shrink), desire for him and envy (of how Max prefers Asley).
Megan and Max are right now my favorite chracters and their interactions are always interesting for moving the story and rising the tension for future events.
Author's Response:
I want to say thanks for all the support you've shown. You're reviews are absolutely helping to keep me motivated and while I dont reply instantly, just know that each review is read and appreciated.
I do plan on adding in more of the "Memories" sort of chapters where we see the various interactions between a variety of characters, but I got so wrapped up in the main story that I just had to keep writing and posting those chapters. I'm glad that people are enjoying the Megan and Max dynamic though! I was planning on focusing just on Ashley when I started but Megan became super important to fill in the time between Ashley being Max's guardian and Ashley starting to "fulfill Max's perversions."
Again, thank you so much for being such an outspoken supporter. You are appreciated!
[Report This]Date: July 29 2019 6:19 PM Title: The Game
Megan is such a great character! It's delightful how she uses her odor and athleticism to torment Max. It'd be great if you could describe her soccer outfit a little more. Can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thanks! I did not initially plan for Megan to really play that big of a role but people love her already!
Her college uniform consiste of a jersey and shorts combo, mainly a black base with gold accents. Beneath the top layer, Megan always plays in a sports bra and her favorite "lucky" pair of spandex booty shorts. She insists that this specific garment is what helped her be the leading scoring forward on the team this year. And because of her inherent laziness, these shorts will occasionally go multiple practices or even games with out getting washed.
I think you have just inspired a new flashback chapter featuring this info. Stay tuned!
Date: July 29 2019 4:54 PM Title: The Road Trip
Aww, I really hope poor Max ultimately finds someone he can reach out to for help (missing Mom or online/childhood friend to the rescue?) or Ashley suffers a guilt trip revelation. Slipping into a cycle of abuse and neglect from family is an upsetting way to go :(
Author's Response:
While things inevitably get pretty rough for Max, he is a strong spirited man and not the type of person to give up hope. After all, things are always darkest before the dawn!
Stay tuned to see how tings play out!
[Report This]Date: July 26 2019 4:44 PM Title: Memories "Little Sister"
Awesome! I love her obsession with tiny people
[Report This]Date: July 26 2019 4:20 AM Title: Smelling Salts
I really like the direction this is going. Hope Megan and Alexis will be successful in slowly convincing Ashley that our "lucky" hero is into smelling and tasting any kind of female body odour, and of course especially Ashley's. No matter how nasty.;P
One thing concerning the treatment of the MC. I wouldn't go the way of the Females torturing him in ways that could severely harm or kill him (like throwing him in the toilet or threatening to crush him under their feet).
I think it would be more powerful if they show that they care about keeping him "intact". So that they can keep him long term as nothing but a slave-toy, subjugated to worship their sweaty feet, armpits, butt cracks and pussies for many, many years to come. :)
At least imho that is a way more humiliating and damning prospect to look forward to.
Author's Response:
I'm in agreement with you there my friend. In a recently posted chapter we learn that an RP (reduced person) has an awfully high damage threshold. Too bad that resilliance doesn't protect his sense of smell!
Thank you so much for reading and I very much appreciate the review.
Stay Tuned!
Date: July 26 2019 3:38 AM Title: Smelling Salts
Really nice story!
Thank you for the good work. I can't wait to read more of you.
I really like the focus on unpleasant smells so far!
Maybe he will have to take a dive in a toilet in some time.
Keep doing you thing.
Date: July 25 2019 7:23 AM Title: Making your case
From what I can tell, Max and Megan have a lot in common. Both are not honest about how they fell and think.
Max obviously doesn't have much contact with other girls, and thinks Megan is very beautiful, what obviously ignates an inner conflict. Does he crave for her? Is he a pervert? To top it down, deep down he thinks she sees him as Alexis sees, as a burden and powerless, so he tries to assert his authority over her. Then, there is Megan hipocrisy of geting angry at Max for peeping but using her butt and underwear as "punishment". Hell, in the first chapter she wanted to put him inside her shoes and smell her socks!
Don't know if I am reading far too much into the chracters. I tend to do that. Either way, those are my thoughts on the last 3 chapters. Please keep updating regulary! It doesn't need to be every day, but, once a week maybe? As you can see I am invested in the story and characters :DD
[Report This]Date: July 24 2019 8:41 PM Title: Making your case
I'll admit I jumped to the end here. But the butt action is amazing! I love these sister gf dynamics, and trying to change everyone to viewing him as a perv. I'll need to start from the begging, but this is a great story and I look forward to more!
Author's Response:
Well it seems in this sort of format, that is quite a compliment to the writing haha. I appreciate you reading and taking the time to review.
Thanks & Stay tuned for more!
[Report This]Date: July 24 2019 1:12 AM Title: Freedom.... or not
Seems our hero will have to get used to every kind of female body odor and taste.;) Personally I would like to see him really getting into it, instead of being repulsed. Doesn't have to happen immediately, but maybe have him progressing towards being sexually excited about being humiliated and used like that.
I mean most of the readers of the story are surely into that, so him becoming excited by it makes it easier identify with the MC.
Author's Response:
Hmmm, I'm not sure if our hero will transition into a willing slave, but it isn't impossible. That being said, I've got a thought in mind on who to include what youre looking for. Stay tuned! And thanks for reading!
Date: July 23 2019 6:08 AM Title: Bath Time
it was very clever to make Megan drunk. The part where Max Thinks “What if I WAS the face on the back of this thong” kkkkk Loved it. The Devil is in the details.
Thank you for the updates. Can't wait for more Megan-Max interaction.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the reviews my friend, it is very much appreciated. I'm glad that people are enjoying Megan's interactions with Max. We will be seeing some multiple giantess fun in the upcoming chapters. Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: July 23 2019 3:23 AM Title: Smelling Salts
Love the frequent updates, the story so far.
I hope that there will be some more scenes where Alexis/Megan tortures Max using the body of Ashley(or each other) while the other is unaware(like the scene in chapter 5)
And can’t wait to see Max face Megan’s revenge though it might be way too big for him to handle in his current situation.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I'll keep that in mind for future chapters. Stay tuned for the next chapter!
Date: July 18 2019 8:44 PM Title: Introductions are in order
And two last things: Think about the end of the story. Doesn't need to be thought down to details. Just in general. I know it's strange when the story has just begun, but, it helps the process of creation when you have a general idea of the story you want to tell. Too many good stories like this in the site that are simply dropped or take years without reaching a conclusion and it would be a pit to see that to happen with your chracters.
Also, now that the introductions are over, focus on the fetish parts. Start to crack Max world. You could use Megan in the next chapter as she will be coming back from the cinema and Ashley will be busy atending to Alexis all night and Max will not want to disturb By the morning you shift back to Alexis.
I swear I will stop with the long tips. It's your story and it's a good one. Your writing is not bad. Just some missing words here and there, but it's very clean.
Thank you and rooting to see this story till the end. Good Luck!
Date: July 18 2019 7:53 PM Title: Introductions are in order
I am amazed with how quick you came up with a fetish situation that fiits in so natural into the narrative (chapter 5) while also making progress in worldbulding (the part of the couples of different sizes as well as a bit of the protagonist past in chapter 4).
Now, the only thing that ended up feeling too formal and specific for the context was Ashley saing "he has the same rights that we do"(ch. 5). I understand your intention, but, only the part "“Actually, we don’t pick Max up without permission" would suffice as it implies he is perceived as their equal. But, that is just my perpective and surely not a problem.
I liked how you described the situations in chapter 5. People seem to enjoy when there is detais. For instance, the smell, the shape of the toes, the color of the soles, if there is dirt in it and the various sensations and feelings of the tiny as well the giantess... all that maximize the sensation tha Max is very small and powerless when confronted with the other chracters.
As always, looking forward for the next chapters. I am curious to see where you are going with the dinamic between the brother and sisters. Too many possibilities! Keep it up! Added you and your story to the favorites.