Date: December 19 2019 4:05 PM Title: Performance Review
It was beyound stupid at lest have pepole seem human
Author's Response:
I figured I'd respond to both of your reviews here. Your “review” leads me to believe that you didn’t really read the story, or, if you did, you didn’t understand what you were reading. William is trying to save his family, but things are blowing up in his face. He doesn’t understand how the world he lives in works. Also, you're not supposed to like him... I don't. Either way, I don’t know why your spamming everybody’s stories with super negative comments or “reviews”.
Date: December 18 2019 10:59 PM Title: High-Heel Workday
This story is more interesting than I thought. The characters are interesting and Naomi's tragic backstory was nice. Mary getting high with power while giantdespite being so timid at first was also fun. Perhaps Naomi can train her and keep her big as a sort of companion. And just where did that sizer tech come from? Seems like something the military would love to have to fight the giants themselves instead of making deals with them.
I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you liked it. The size tech is going to be explained more in future chapters. I had the same questions too after I wrote about it! We will see some people try to get a hold of it in order to undo Naomi... but we'll see what happens.
[Report This]Date: December 18 2019 5:55 PM Title: High-Heel Workday
Naomi is truly a wonderful character, so big and powerful but there's some caring in there under the surface...just a little.
Author's Response:
Just a little! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: December 18 2019 3:40 PM Title: High-Heel Workday
Naomi seems like a very powerful person and yet she is still jealous of normal stuff. I think deep down she likes William too much and she secretly wants to spend as much time as possible with him.
Thank you for writing and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Yes, exactly. She's lonely...but she's created some of these problems herself. Like an ironic tragedy. And I think she likes William too much as well, it's going to cloud her judgement on things for sure. Thank you for reading! Hope you continue to like what I write!
Date: December 18 2019 1:51 AM Title: High-Heel Workday
Naomi could trick mary into going through a portal but she doesnt realise shes giant because shes still indoors. Love these characters!
Author's Response:
That is one I hadn't thought of!
Date: December 18 2019 1:47 AM Title: High-Heel Workday
One of your best chapters! The detail in the entrapment scene was fantastic, i hope you come up with more chapters like it.
Naomi should torture Will by placing him around Mary's giant feet/shoes while she is grown and unaware
Author's Response:
Wow I'm glad to hear you liked this chapter! It was alot of fun to write. And yes, there will be more chapters like it for sure! Remember, he's still in her shoe, so there is still more to come on that. And the thought of Will being tiny at the unaware feet of his wife is an excellent idea and is in the outline a few chapters away. It's like you read my mind! Hopefully I can do it justice when it gets written. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: December 09 2019 8:40 AM Title: Performance Review
Your story is incredible, I love Mary's subplot and how she behaves being giantess, I hope to see more chapters with eagerness.
Author's Response:
She is very conflicted for sure! Thank you for liking it and leaving a comment, I appreciate it! I hope you continue to like future chapters as well.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2019 7:03 AM Title: Naomi Begins
This story already started interesting and is becoming more interesting. Nice to see the giantess has a backstory and you're doing a good job of continuously contemplating who I'm rooting for.
I'm looking forward to the next one and thank you for writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you for liking it and leaving a comment! I don't even know who I'm rooting for half the time!
Date: December 07 2019 5:22 AM Title: Performance Review
I know this is a story for fun and probably shouldn't be over analyzed but who in their right mind would work for such a company? Naomi is so volatile and random you can be killed just by sheer coincidence of being in her path at the wrong time or for any number of reasons.
Author's Response: Haha! True! But like you said, it’s just for fun. But still... should probably make it more appealing to work there!
Date: December 07 2019 4:29 AM Title: Naomi Begins
Glad to see a new chapter of this! Great stuff, here's hoping a switch to the children's perspective and a later footwear scene with high heels.
Author's Response: Don’t worry! It’s coming! Thanks for liking it!
[Report This]Date: December 07 2019 1:07 AM Title: Naomi Begins
God I love Naomi so much!
Also nice to see a bit of her backstory/humanity etc.
Author's Response: Thanks! I’m glad you’re still liking it!
[Report This]Date: November 05 2019 3:18 PM Title: Performance Review
Wow!! This is the best story I have read in a long long time!!!!
I hope you write more!! I really loved that Mary’s shoe of choice was converse!!! I’d like to read more about her using those to squish more tiny people! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Awesome! Glad to hear you liked it!
[Report This]Date: October 25 2019 5:11 PM Title: Mary's Revenge
This is quickly becoming one of my all time favs. One thing i think that works so well is despite Naomi's cruelty she's actualy been quite good to william and appreciative of his contributions to her business and pleasure. When Mary left she could have threatened or tortured him to give her up but merely persuaded him with facts and went to actually save Mary. In a certain sense you can argue Mary is actually a villian herself for leaving William in a situation she believed to be dangerous and leaving woth the kids to what dhe belived to be safety. She is certainly being corrupted by the poewr Naomi is giving her. I jusy hope William or the kids dont dont to suffer for her defying Naomi. You've done a great job giving each character some depth and inner goodness and badness. Cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you much! I really see Mary as a likable villain. I hope she stays that way but who knows what she’ll do...
[Report This]Date: October 25 2019 1:10 AM Title: Mary's Revenge
Naomi is an incredible villain.
Author's Response: I agree!
Date: October 24 2019 10:17 PM Title: Performance Review
Great new chapter! I'm curious, will a later chapter contain a scene of a person trapped inside one of Naomi's high heels?
Author's Response: Thank you! And absolutely it will!
[Report This]Date: October 23 2019 1:44 PM Title: Performance Review
I love the idea of this story. The originality is great. I especially liked when Mary goes through the portal and is so regretful of her actions, it's refreshing to see that in a well written piece.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I appreciate your kind words!
[Report This]Date: October 11 2019 12:26 AM Title: Runaway Mary
Naomi is such an entrepreneur.
Author's Response:
Haha, she is!
[Report This]Date: August 14 2019 6:39 PM Title: Crushing Guilt
This is really a fun read. Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response:
Wow, another one of my favorite authors reveiwing my story! Thank you for your kind words, it really means alot coming from you. If you have any ideas or suggestions for the story, let me know. All of yours are masterpieces!
[Report This]Date: August 12 2019 11:53 PM Title: Crushing Guilt
It's rare to see a sympathetic giantess but very well done. Also Naomi is as awesome as ever.
Author's Response:
Awesome! I'm glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: August 12 2019 4:34 AM Title: Crushing Guilt
Wow, quite a ride. Mary's perspective freshened it all up. Not gonna lie, though, you took a few shortcuts earlier, with the lawyer just being too lazy for instance. You could have sold that better. Still a great read.
Author's Response:
I am happy with how Mary's character has turned out. Hoping to keep it fresh with her. And yes, I agree about the shortcuts. I'm not very good at writing convinving or interesting dialogue so it is what it is I suppose. When I was first fleshing out the story from my outline, I didn't think that this story was going to have any depth to it, just a simple "formulaic" giantess story. But I'm still glad you liked it, that is awesome.
I am at a point where I'm unsure where to take the story now. I keep rewriting my outline but I'm not satisfied with it, so it might be a while before you see an update again. But please continue to give me your thoughts and perspective on things. I appreciate it.