[Report This]Date: July 17 2019 9:10 AM Title: Swim Champ
Great story. Reminds me of MicroJakes Brats & Bullies shorts.
I love these stories that start in one chapter, end in like 1 or 2. They're concise but have just enough plot to have some sort of pay-off. I'd love to see more.
[Report This]Date: July 07 2019 1:28 PM Title: Swim Champ
Imagine if one day you ended up shrunk in a toliet and there is nothing you can do all at. I liked your story. Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: July 07 2019 1:28 PM Title: Swim Champ
Imagine if one day you ended up shrunk in a toliet and there is nothing you can do all at. I liked your story. Keep up the good work.
Date: June 27 2019 3:43 PM Title: Swim Champ
WOW thank you for the great story. There aren't enoigh toiletstory on here and yours is one of the best!
Please keep going!
Can't wait to read more from you
Date: June 27 2019 5:19 AM Title: Swim Champ
chapter 1 was great. good imagery
[Report This]Date: June 27 2019 12:40 AM Title: Swim Champ
Very nice! Keep it up!
Date: June 26 2019 6:03 PM Title: Swim Champ
What a bunch of CRAP! Lol! ha,ha, ha I just had to say that! Couldn't help myself!
She shouldv'e taken him home with her first and teased him a bit more. Stuffed him inside her cleveage and went for a run. Then, maybe a swim... took him home and flushed him.
Nice story though, I enjoyed it!
Date: June 26 2019 5:36 PM Title: Swim Champ
this is a great start to what could quickly become a great series, thank you for writing this