Date: July 15 2019 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
FFFUUUUCCCKKKKK. I have read many many many stories on this site over the years. A lot of them aren’t even on the site anymore. This story . . . . . . . . . . . . . . More specifically this chapter hit me really hard. It was so intense I almost cried and that’s not easy to do. I’m so hooked on this story I’m literally checking almost every hour for the next chapter. Great job!!!!!!!
Date: July 15 2019 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
There needs to be more paragraph breaks and when a character talks that begins a new paragraph
[Report This]Date: July 15 2019 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 8
Holy shit this is intense. And I love it. Great story so far.
[Report This]Date: July 15 2019 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
This easily the most heart-wrenching chapters of this story so far. This feels like Caleb is at his absolute lowest... so that means it can only go up from here hehe (i hope) anyway can Rachel and Audrey ever make it up to Caleb, will Caleb ever come to realize that he is loved, I look forward to finding out it the future.
Date: July 15 2019 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter expanding more on Caleb's past adding even more to the fuel. Everyone that did Caleb wrong being more guilt ridden by being forgiven but made aware that he will never trust another soul, find love or happiness ever again. Hope they suffer even more since they couldnt even be bothered to look into the crime like Caleb said.
Reminds me of another story I enjoy on this site, its all about trust and what happens when they break it.
Havent been hooked liked this in awhile keep up the great work.
Date: July 06 2019 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 7
This was a great chapter. Interesting to see how Caleb moves forward. I am curious how did Alison meet her fate. Excitingly waiting for the next chapter.
Date: July 05 2019 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wait if caleb is rrlated to rachel and audrey then there should be an incest tag
Date: July 05 2019 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
But...people can't have relationships with animals...
[Report This]Date: July 04 2019 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
My god man this is phenomenal. Very few stories on this site and in general make me feel this level of anticipation for each new chapter. Re-reading previous chapters makes me feel that Rachel and Audrey derserve to feel this guilt and so much more for what they have done, that being said I dont think they can go back to the way that things were before the incident, but Caleb is smart and he has a big heart I dont think this will completely destroy him so I hope that they can all get some closure, and Caleb be recognise as the hero he is. I'll be waiting for the next chapter with baited breath.
[Report This]Date: July 04 2019 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Extremely impressed. Reminds me of a just a few stories back in the day. This already in legendary status in my mind. I'll suggest nothing. Outstanding.
Awaiting what I feel is the inevitable attempt at recompense.
Will be watching closely.
Date: July 04 2019 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh snap! That was amazing! The shock and guilt Audrey and Rachael have and your way of describing it all is phenominal. Now the question is: what happens from here? The GPF knows about the video and is clearly shaken. Caleb...I curious to see what he will do next.
his heart and soul have been ripped apart by his family after all. Even if they apologize, will he even care? And as for storing the video for later use, maybe there is still the option to upload it later?
Date: July 04 2019 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
This was great. Well worth the wait I wanna see how she stopped Rachel. Further more how Rachel handled it when she found out she was wrong. Also what about Allison? So many questions and so many answers. I’m curious to see which way this story goes.
Date: July 03 2019 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
ridiculously good, please send more our way
[Report This]Date: July 03 2019 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
God damn your writing is superb, I usually have trouble reading stories dealing with betrayal like this but holyshit I cant stop reading this. I can't help but feel terrible for everyone involved even Rachel and Audrey after what they did to Caleb. The guilt they must feel is something I dont think I would wish on my worst enemy. And the fact that Caleb doesn't want to take his own life is wild to me, if I was in his shoes I would have ended it all as soon as possible. I feel like a fool for wishing this but I hope that these all of them can find some happiness in the end even if Rachel adn Audrey dont deserve it.
Date: July 03 2019 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hold on, when is Rachel gonna admit she is guilty?
Date: July 03 2019 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 6
Man I know I wanted war but this is just as great seeing audrey feeling so guilty she pukes everytime she think about caleb and her part doing all that to him and how caleb words haunt her is very good cant wait to see how Rachel taking it and see how caleb will go forward into the future
Date: July 02 2019 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
This has been one of the best stories I’ve been hooked on. Can’t wait to read the reaction when everyone finds out the truth. I’m so hooked I’m literally check every few hours waiting for the next chapter. Never done that on a story before. Great job.
Date: July 01 2019 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow.
Please tell me this story will continue. I assume Rachel knows the truth now and realized what she's done to an innocent person she's supposed to love. Same with everyone else. I really love these "betrayal of trust" stories where the giantesses realize they've made a terrible mistake and I'm on edge to read what happens next.
Keep it up!
[Report This]Date: June 28 2019 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
Usually not into this kind of stuff where the giantess are cold much less cruel. But you captured me with the story. I really hope it ruins both of them.
Date: June 28 2019 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving the plot on this one! I do wonder how the giantesses obtained such technology despite their apparent incompetence at using it, to be totally bamboozled by humans. Perhaps, they (or at least the colonising group) didn't build it?