[Report This]Date: April 04 2024 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Is there any hope to see more of this story?
[Report This]Date: February 23 2021 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Your storytelling is great. How Caleb deals with being falsely accused and how he slowly degenerates as a character due to constant abuse and abandonement is superb and so emotionally twisting. It feels like it is almost like netorare, but without the cheating.
There is just one issue I have with this story and it is after the vore chapter in 5. When Caleb is in recovery talking to Miranda, this is where the logic falls apart abit. Understandably he believes he is unloved since not one persone stood by him, but what makes him feel robotic is how he explains it, and how he forgives everyone "just because". I dont know if its by design, but it ends up feeling like he is forced to forgive just for the plots sake. There is no humanistic stage where he has to deal with anger towards his family and how they mutilated him into something less than human. At first I thought it was going down a route where he was going insane, which would make this conversation and how he is just lifelessly accepting his new situation understandable, but unfortunately that is not the case.
This line of conversation ends up killing the emotion and life his character hed before as the developement hes being forced through feels so lifeless, and sfterwards troughout the rest of the story, he feels like a robot who has one emotion: fear. His character has been forcefully developed into a corner and it feels just as big of a tragedy as what he went through.
All in all and excellent story from the first chapter to the 6. 4/5 stars
[Report This]Date: February 11 2021 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 10
I hope you find the inspiration to continue. It's characters feel so real.
Date: July 22 2020 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 10
Icredible story!!!
Can´t wait till the next episode!!
Thank you!!!!
This is quality writing!
Date: April 27 2020 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thank you for the surprise!! I´m sure that wasn´t the only one waiting for a new chapter.
I Hope that you share with us the next chapter soon!
Date: April 27 2020 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
One of the best stories in this site. Your deep thinking is really enjoyable. Thank you for this story. please, please continue!
Date: March 25 2020 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm so glad you returned to continue this story. This is easily one of the most interesting stories I've read on this site and I'm excited to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: March 21 2020 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's unbelievable to me that I came to this story looking for something to get off to but I ended up staying for hours, reading to the very end. You are a very talented author, one of the two whose works I have been privileged enough to read on this site. Your character building and use of emotions and psychosis make the reader themselves get invested in the characters is nothing short of magnificent, as you can feel the emotions that the character is feeling. I look forward to the next chapter in your story.
Date: March 20 2020 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you!!!!!! Love this story!
[Report This]Date: March 20 2020 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow first animal crossing the doom and now this
this is the best day of my life
Date: March 19 2020 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was unexpectedly intense. What wonderful writing! This is a story that's really affected me, so much so that I was up way too late finishing it. Bravo!
Date: March 19 2020 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
So glad you were able to do another chapter. I was super worried that this would never move forward. I really enjoyed this chapter. It just gets you really emotional. I think you did a great job. It really makes me wish there was a comic or manga of this story. Cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: March 19 2020 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
Nice to see another chapter, Thank you Kindly for sharing.
[Report This]Date: March 19 2020 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm really glad to see another chapter. You've really managed to put Caleb into a realistic place. His PTSD is depicted very well. Hope you get more time to post because you're a great writer.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2019 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to see how this ends. Also I like how Rachael had that mini daydream nightmare. In either case keep up the good work.
Date: July 25 2019 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
This was an interesting chapter. You had me going for awhile. I was like “Oh Shit she really fucked up now.” Then the twist. I’m not a fan of the whole extensive fantasy that turns out to not be happening but you did it well. Again I’m so hooked I’m literally checking every hour for updates lol. But I know this is going backwards I really want to know how Allison died and what exactly happened when she turned herself in.
[Report This]Date: July 25 2019 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
I have been enjoying the story so far, It reminds me of the story Omega: Inheritance. Another story were in a normal sized person that was adopted by a family of Giantesses but who's closes ties don't seem to matter when she is framed for a crime she did not commit and her "sister" is in charage of her punishment.
Another common thread is that I wish there was more justice against the giantesses. In that story and yours, but then again I am most likely more vindictive than most people.
To me when you love someone you give them a beneifit of a doubt if they say they are innocennt. Espeically if you grew up with them. If they do something that seems so out character how can you not at least have some doubt of their guilt. To at least investigate their verison of the story on your own before disowning them. Don't they deserve at least that much?
In that way I find the Giantesses in your story and in Omega more cruel than those that Rampage and wipe out whole cities. Their Victims are strangers or heck even rivals, but the victims in your story and in Jack's were suppose to be family and loved ones. But look how quickly they turned on them.
Any way, thank you for the time and effort to write and share your work.
[Report This]Date: July 25 2019 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 9
Woah I was wondering how you were going to reintroduce fetish material back to this story and I was not disappointed, that being said it was really jarring to see that she has fantasys of eating humans after everything shes been through. Although I'm not sure if she still has the feeling given how they ended and coming to realize that that's how Caleb sees her. I'm hoping that she can nip this in the bud before it can escelate out of control. I'm also glad to see some progress with Caleb regarding meeting Audrey even if they couldnt comunicate in anyway. Another great chapter good job!
Date: July 25 2019 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
Please let this end good. This chapter had me going there,man. Although, excellent work with rachel’s Guilt about eating Miranda. That guilt she’s feeling makes the her more appalling as a character. You know how to create a good sad atmosphere!
[Report This]Date: July 16 2019 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
My friend, this was absolutely stunning, you managed to turn the standard tropes on their side as well as show the horror side of the genre with some human feeling characaters who were more than a vessel for base fetishism. Hope to see more from you