Date: September 11 2019 5:45 PM Title: At the outset.....
Sorry, I forgot to rate in my last review. Here!
Date: September 10 2019 3:39 PM Title: At the outset.....
Really digging this man, I love it! Looking forward to seeing some 'gross' and odorous stuff too :)
Date: September 02 2019 8:04 PM Title: Steve
Great chapter! this is my favorite so far even though he died at the end I enjoye reading everything that happened tohimon the way. Great details. I like how he had no choice but to enter her asshole or die.
Date: September 02 2019 8:01 PM Title: Brian
I will always wonder what happened to him. My theory is he never leaves and has to live there like a scavenger for the rest of his long life but who knows???
Date: September 02 2019 8:00 PM Title: At the outset.....
This story is great, I love it!
It's true that two chapters were a little short, but your most recent chapter was amazing! the only tip I'd like to add is maybe a brief description of the woman. nothing too detailed; brunette, plump or skinny, details of the ass. anything to paint a basic image in the readers mind.
Date: September 02 2019 5:30 AM Title: At the outset.....
really great concept and idea, wished the chapters were longer.
Date: May 31 2019 7:38 AM Title: At the outset.....
Very goooooooood story😍😍😍😍
Please contiue ...
Date: May 29 2019 6:11 AM Title: At the outset.....
Very good opening. Thanks that you wrote a story to this concept. Here can everyone see the pics to the story. https://www.deviantart.com/papajogick/art/Selfie-Challange-01-770022506
Date: May 28 2019 1:32 AM Title: At the outset.....
A usual good idea but... word count is like 10 times too short I guess for something ^^