Reviews For Brother-napped
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Reviewer: Cgin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2022 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm waiting for the continuation of the story

Reviewer: Schroedinger Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2019 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was amazing... Although I hate stories that involve the death of the shrinkee, I have to give credit where credit is due. This did not feel like other deaths that I have read. Before the death even happened, your story had me shaking with fear for Ethan. This is the first time I have seen a death written this well.



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Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2019 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm dumb and forgot to review again
Amazing work, I think it turned out great!  I love the escalation of it as the sister grows more desperate, I really love how the other brother was ok with helping just to eventually suffer for it

Reviewer: redcars Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2019 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

The psychological play was totally brilliant great story written and idea.

Reviewer: Gogblo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2019 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

enjoyed it for sure, I enjoyed other stories more like the Ashelys one but it was still 90 of 100. I enjoyed most stories of yours in the past. ass plots are my favorite though for sure.

Reviewer: pete445 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2019 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoyable from beginning to the end. I enjoy a lot how you build up plots like this, most people lack this talent on here and are just bad writers in general. Didnt see the ending actually coming really good. I enjoy your scat plots the most. I love it most grim and enjoy evil endings.

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2019 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

I found the plot kinda confusing to follow to be honest, maybe it was just being late when I read it lol. Yet I am glad to see a new story. The jumps between the characters was confusing to me though, maybe it is just me.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2019 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing. I love how fast paced it was and very entertaining.

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2019 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow. I really enjoy these "tragedy through misunderstanding" type of stories.  Formerly nice girl torturing her best friend's brother just because she wasn't told where he'd be for a week and found those naughty emails.  For the next part, I hope Paul and Olivia go to confront Vicky together instead of Olivia doing something to Paul to get revenge.  It would be far more delicious for Vicky to learn of her mistake and be wracked with guilt over what she's done.

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2019 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really interesting concept did not see any mistakes on my first read. Happy to see some one shot stories too. Great written as always.

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