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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2023 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Seldom have I been more disappointed in a story as I am with this. For 3/4 of the story, this was a great erotic tale, well written, with a great villainess and her interesting young prey. But that 2nd shrinking just completely obliterated things for me and was against everything written about the girl's motivations up to that point. What sexual or actual hunger motivation could be quenched from eating a...crumb?  Personally, I'm thinking 1.5 to 2 inches is the perfect swallowing size, but I could live with the original shrinking to .75 inches. But now down to a crumb? Very disappointing.

I thought about rating this lower, but just felt that the bulk of the story was so good, that I couldn't go below a 6.

Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2019 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 5

If this is a slow burn vore story, then I suppose I understand why so few people who begin to read mine have finished! In any case, I thought this was profoundly well-executed. The introduction was adequately stage-setting and didn’t drag, and you spent a tantalizingly thorough amount of time on every subsequent step of the process, from establishing the characters and declaring the plot, to getting him firmly situated beyond the point of no return.

If I had to pick one word to describe this little work, it would be “diabolical.” I really enjoyed it. As someone who’s favorite aspect of g/t is vore while still very much liking the gentle aspect, this story really suited my fancy, and had me simultaneously rooting for the victim to somehow talk his way out of it while also taking satisfaction in the pred getting her way. This story delivers, And it was well-written. I rate it five stars.

Reviewer: Gigatennisstar Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2019 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

This story was great! From start to finish the anticipation was electric and I loved every minute of every word. I know this was a commission but I really hope we get to see more of Julie living out her fantasy elsewhere. 

As far as the story goes, the writing was superb, the descripitions amazing. Every detail you presented to the reader was described in a way they could really see and it was fantastic. Thanks for this story! I look forward to reading your stories in the future.

Reviewer: Her-chocolatebar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2019 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Omg!!! For me anyway... simply one of your best yet! :)
I was totally captivated from start to finish... feeling nothing but envy for a fortunate young male scientist!
Please write more of this flavour... and text me Julie's number hey? Hahaha :)

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Thanks for the read/review

Reviewer: InHerBelly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2019 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is perfect.



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Thanks much

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2019 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 4

this story has been great.



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Glad to hear

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2019 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 2

It's always a pleasure to read your work... great start... looking forward to more!



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Thanks very much

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