Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2019 8:22 PM Title: Protesting the Rules

I knew it. I knew it. So, I assume that a was Hannah, since she can't be lied to?

I voted in your pole for 'send them out into the universe'. The reason being, you were already setting that up for sooner or later, or had seemed to be with Lucile declaring Emma would be joining her over the summer. And there's only 3 weeks left.

Maybe Ria goes with?

But of course I'm 100% for more divinity.

I'm curious to see what the Goddesses need Emma for...

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2019 4:30 PM Title: Family Protests

Emma is just so confused isn't she? I've got some ideas. I'm assuming this is still tied to PoGU since their homeworld is Gwental Minor and their first Empress was Hannah.

1. Since Emma will be joining her sister in the field, maybe they can conquer a world using their powers.

2. Maybe their world and Earth and the tirsgardians can be in the equivalent of a galactic preserve that the goddesses leave alone. They end up sailing their fleet outside of it and they can encounter the goddesses and learn that they aren't the top of the food chain. So they get an unwelcome -to them- role reversal. And maybe Hannah has to say to the other goddesses, 'knock it off, those are my great, great...... great granddaughters.'

3. They discover how to be goddesses themselves.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review :) Emma's had some manipulation take hold, something I plan on bringing more to the front soon.

I can neither confirm nor deny the existence of divine beings in this universe.

1. Yes, This is a possibility i think, Lucile really wants Emma to be a "true" titan.

2. I can neither confirm nor deny the existence of divine beings in this universe.

3. I can neither confirm nor deny the existence of divine beings in this universe.

 

If you have any other thoughts i welcome them :)

 

Kind regards

JFT

 

Reviewer: vicgiantessadmirer Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2019 9:20 PM Title: Privileged Protest

Two things, one, are there any tiny extremist groups? sorry, just a thought. two, about that story request, (I am surprised I have not found this anywhere on this site, or any other site), Did you ever see the magic school bus? (That is how I found out I like this) Specifically the one about the water cycle where they were transformed into tiny little water droplets? I think someone turning into a drop water (ice, gas, and well... water) has lots of potential. great story btw

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I plan to bring in a potent extremist group, Shed more light on the workings behind the scenes that converted Emma.

I have thought about how I would write the story request, (I looked up the episode) and I think I know how i would write a mini-story to that concept. It is in my todo queue! I cant promise on when though.

Reviewer: GTStation Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2019 1:47 PM Title: Militant Punishments

 

Dude, this story is very good, seriously, you have no idea how I love stories of this kind where you have one extremely dominant race over another, seriously, this is so good.
I can only say good things about your writing, it's a lot of immersion in this universe that you created.

About ideas ... maybe if at some point there is a human who has a total advantage over the titans, because as Emma was revealed to be much stronger and more and more cruel to humans, it would be interesting to see a villain put a serious problem

 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words! I am hoping to build the universe out a bit more now!

Giving Emma herself an adivsary in college is tricky! I will find a way to give her some real peril soon, may require a setup though!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2019 4:32 PM Title: Militant Protests

Very much so.

 

The entitle college students fighting for a cause while openly doing everything they can to half ass/sabotoge it reminds me a lot of real life.

 

Plus always enjoyed the tales of the bigger races of people invading our own.

Reviewer: fatal15 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2019 2:25 PM Title: Privileged Protest

Love this story.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the support! means alot!