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Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2019 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Basically have mommy torture her poor son to hammer home Alicia’s point that mom can’t help him!!!

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2019 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Have mommy torture him underfoot all day unaware. He can be her insoles so she walks all over him. Than she can shrink him and have mom do other things to him unawarely! Make him wish it was a nightmare!

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2019 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed the story... Great concept.  You may want to to have a second pair of eyes help to proofread.  

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2019 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please Continue!!! Love this story!

Reviewer: Falafalfury Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2019 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

I hope you received the message I send you.

Reviewer: nelrod Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2019 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good start, please continue!

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