Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2019 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 3

I have mixed feelings about this story. Initial I thought there wasn’t enough description in chapter two but it seems okay, I guess, in hindsight. I mean becoming a Balancer is a big decision right? I wasn’t sure if you captured the emotion of the situation well enough. But look, compared most of the stories on this website yours actually quite easy to follow, and I don’t want you feel as though I really dislike your writing because I don’t.
 
There is a certain charm to this story. Putting aside the fact that it’s incestuous (nothing wrong with two people loving each other but not really for me), I like the idea behind it. Sex is normally an act that would put them in an extremely vulnerable position so the fact they’d do it over a city like that exudes power – it shows how dominant they truly are. That was a nice thing to write in, and it emphasises how little their victims mean to them, how insignificant they are.
 
I’d want explore other Balancers in this universe too; I feel this is one of those stories that could keep being written until the author gets bored so it may be wise to freshen things up with new perspectives as the story grows. The first person does make it feel more personal of course. You have a certain knack to this and you can certainly carve out a niche for yourself. I suspect any reservations that I may have may gradually dissipate as the story goes on. I’ve written similar stories to this one in the past.
 
If you’d like I propose that we use my skills in Daz3D to make some fan art (promotional art) for this story of yours. Maybe we could also figure out some kind of art trade or that I commission yourself to write something, because I think I may have stumbled upon something unexpectedly awesome in the slag heap known as Giantess World. What would be the way to communicate if so? Do you have an e-mail address?

Reviewer: Landwasser Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2019 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

A really cool story with a nice concept.