[Report This]Date: February 03 2019 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Possibilities
#RelationshipGoals ;) lol
[Report This]Date: February 03 2019 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Ends
I like the way Heather thinks... ;) lol
[Report This]Date: February 03 2019 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Choices
Loved the chapter don't mind m/m and couple stuff please continue.
Author's Response:
Yeah good because there'll be more in the future! Cheers
[Report This]Date: February 03 2019 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Choices
To me the best aspect of the story thus far is Ben realizing how quickly things have spun out of his control and despite the knowledge of the superiority complex that Heather has, is realizing that the magnitude of it and he's in a near powerless state while she registers him as a slave rather than her partner, plus having to resist his lust while deeling with the giants.
Jason's characterization has also made him an interesting antagonist beyond that of a meathead brute, but calculating and knowing how people tick. Not only that, you've done a good job of making Jason and Heather have different M.O's in terms of getting what they want. While Jason likes to willingly make his subjects to submit to his rule and wants to mentally break Ben down, Heather practically gives him an ultimatum to make him obey her.
I'm curious to what will happen in the event that Jason is or isn't compatible for growth. If he isn't compatible, he runs risk to being in the same spot as Ben and even if he is compatible, will someone with as severe a God Complex as Heather will be happy to 'share' power with someone. After witnessing that side of Heather, I wonder if there's a possibility of an unlikely alliance between Ben and Jason.
This story has me hooked.
Author's Response:
Thanks, really glad you're enjoying.
Gotta say, I dated a girl once who was a genuine sociopath but hid that side of her. Fortunately I picked up on the signs after a few months and broke things off as gently as possible. But she was legit scary and clearly had a power hungry side to her. Sexy as hell but it clearly wasn't destined to be a healthy relationship. She's probably off wrecking some other guy's life right now. Frightening to think if she ever got her hands on some growth supplements. Maybe someday I'll write a story more explicitly along those lines, but I am kinda channeling part of her hidden motives here in this story.
Jason is turning into more of a foil to Heather than I planned initially, but you're bang on about his contrasting style and motives.
I have a definitive ending in mind for the story, but I see some possible narrative branches that I may explore in a series of alternate endings, just for fun.
[Report This]Date: February 03 2019 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Love where this is going already... Great introduction! ;)
Date: February 03 2019 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Choices
So hot. Lil too small but idea of him with a couple cock size was very exciting
[Report This]Date: February 03 2019 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Collusion
This story keeps getting better and better
Date: February 02 2019 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Collusion
This is so fucked up.
I love it.
Author's Response:
All seems pretty normal to me. Just a bunch of happy people having a normal Sunday. Golly, I hope they remember to go to church.
[Report This]Date: February 02 2019 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Interrogation
Awesome! Jason is such a great Giant; this is my new favorite story
Author's Response:
Jason's fucking terrifying. But so too is Heather. I can of admire Ben's commitment to resist their totalitarian rule, but of course I'd give in completely.
[Report This]Date: February 02 2019 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Tool
OMG so good! Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: February 02 2019 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Interrogation
lovely! as always, excited to see what's next.
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying :)
[Report This]Date: February 01 2019 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Tool
every chapter is a pleasure. love where it's going.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2019 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Gods
Awesome
[Report This]Date: January 28 2019 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Spurts
I love Heather's attitude adjustment here, especially the belittling nicknames
Date: January 28 2019 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Gods
I can't wait to see more. I'm not even a fan of some stuff that the story may delve into, but this story is so fucking good that I don't care. Kudos to you and I am so curious to see how Heather and Ben end up.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2019 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Yer a wizard, Javert! You’re conjuring up some seriously good shit here. I’m hesitant to make predictions because I don’t want to poison the well so to speak, but I do hope you keep a spotlight on the emotions going forward. That’ll be the linchpin for me in this scenario and with these characters you’ve built, a scenario I’ve imagined countless times by the way. Can’t wait to read more!
Author's Response:
I'll do my best!
[Report This]Date: January 27 2019 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Gods
well, I'm officially jealous. this is the very stuff that I love to write, so it's a rare pleasure to be able to read it without having to do any of the hard work. even still, I wish I had written this story. I love the premise. very much looking forward to where you take it. marvelous chapter.
Author's Response:
Really kind words. Thank you.
Date: January 27 2019 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Really enjoying this, keep up the good work. I love how domineering Heather is, you're doing a great job showing this progression and setting things up. it's so much more satisfying when you see how far they fall.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Glad you're enjoying. :)
[Report This]Date: January 27 2019 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Visitors
I'm really enjoying everything about this story. how dominant heather is, and how she's starting to treat ben more like a pet, and disregard his feelings where they conflict with hers. I'm very curious how jason will interact with ben, too. the idea of him watching ben is very exciting. that ben's overall expected size has been reduced - and that it could be permanent - is also very inspiring. I also really like the juxtaposition of heather and jason's beliefs next to ben's, and how they seem to have more in common.
really love it. great pace, great characters!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Some of that psychology I hope to more fully flesh out. Stay tuned.
[Report This]Date: January 27 2019 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
An excellent story, even if I'm kind of afraid of what it'll turn into, now that Jason has appeared.
I'm a big softy at heart, and I don't want Ben stuck as a dust mite when Jason and Heather e probably ending playing Gods together.
Well, we'll see how it turns out I guess, so keep the good work coming ! :)
Author's Response:
I make no promises, of course. But I do always root for the little guy :)