[Report This]Date: July 15 2019 3:43 PM Title: Redux Chapter 3 - Games
Okay now that was such a fucking hot AND fun chapter to read! Loving this so much! XD
[Report This]Date: July 13 2019 10:43 PM Title: Redux Chapter 4 - Scrub
I'm so glad this story is continuing. I can't wait to see where it goes next.
Any word on the next chapter?
Author's Response:
Yeah. I've been super busy but I should be catching a break in the next couple days. The next chapter I'm eager to write, but the chapter after that I'm really eager to write, so hopefully I get them done before the week is up. I may have to go dark for another week after, so I'll do my best.
Thanks all for reading.
[Report This]Date: July 09 2019 4:56 PM Title: Redux Chapter 4 - Scrub
Amazing! So glad to get more of this story
[Report This]Date: July 03 2019 10:59 AM Title: Redux Chapter 4 - Scrub
Finally Jason in control! Been waiting to see this!
Author's Response:
Hope to have an update Monday, thanks as always for reading!
[Report This]Date: July 02 2019 2:14 PM Title: Redux Chapter 3 - Games
Love this story! So many awesome twists in this chapter. Completely unexpected! Please continue!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Gotta admit, I had my doubts about a chapter revolving around a Mario Kart tournament. Glad you enjoyed.
Date: July 02 2019 9:04 AM Title: Redux Chapter 3 - Games
Well that was... unexpected XD but not unwelcomed. Looking forward to seeing what fun heather has in store, though I’m sensing this version of her is more mellow than the previous one.
Also, Mario Kart 8. That one spammed attack items out the whazoo for everyone not in first place, making it ideal for someone like Ben to “fuck up your day” :P
Author's Response:
That one was the Item Game for sure. Fun but frustrating as hell.
Date: July 01 2019 11:13 AM Title: Redux Chapter 2 - Dinner
Welp, them being able to manipulate the size of others is an interesting development, this will open up a lot of possibilities for the future. I'm personally this chapter was more Jason focused and it seems the next one will follow suite, but that's just a conflict of my own interests and I'm sure many others enjoy reading of him. I'm excited to see A.J. back ack as I loved her in the "other timeline" and hope she gets a little more focus in the future. As always, keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Yep. May want to breeze through the next chapter. Like, real fast, haha. Don't worry. Heather gets her big time real soon. Ben's a lot more arrogant and probably less likable as a consequence in this iteration, but I feel it propels the story in interesting directions. And I like AJ. I'd like to see her get her own big time this go around.
Date: June 27 2019 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Hey again I'm the guy who made an account just to give you a review back when you first started the story. just want to say geat work with the new chapter! and the new timeline idea. I had hoped you would do something of the sort since in the original story there was a lot of build up to Heather and Jason growing but we only got a little bit at the end. But now it feels the story is as it was meant to be. excelent work!
Author's Response:
Thank you. You're right, the original story was tilted toward shrinking and not so much growth. I hope to tilt things in the other direction with this new iteration, but certainly expect a bit of both! Enjoy.
[Report This]Date: June 27 2019 2:29 PM Title: Redux Chapter 1 - Debut
Awesome start!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: June 27 2019 11:29 AM Title: Redux Chapter 1 - Debut
I thought the site glitched for a moment when I saw one of my favorite stories at the top of the Most Recent page but I'm glad you're trying a new direction. I can't wait to see what new scenerios you have in store.
Author's Response:
Ha! Yeah maybe I'm the one that glitched. There were too many directions for the story to go. I figure, why start a brand new story to explore those directions when really I've got the framework right here ready to be hijacked, yknow?
Date: May 09 2019 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
This story started in one direction and seemed to veer completely into another but I was enthralled the entire way through, I wish there were more endings to read different interactions between the characters. I look forward to anything and everything you have coming up!
Author's Response:
There was actually supposed to be a fifth ending, titled "The Atheist" thereby completing the circle. But I never wrote it. It wasn't exactly a sexy chapter, mostly just character work. I may return and write it. I feel somewhat obligated since it wrapped up the otherwise minor detail of the story of Ben's watch.
Date: March 04 2019 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Ring
Just incredible, can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: March 04 2019 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Ring
(LMAO At that caption at the end)
But what a mind blowing chapter! Now I don’t even know how I feel about Heather anymore. I almost kind of feel bad for her… Since she was grown in a lab, with no real parents, I feel like this has caused a severe disconnection to her humanity. She sometimes lacks the basic compassion and understanding for other humans, although she miraculously loves Ben. She craves Ben’s love in return, so maybe Ben is using this to his advantage? I’m not sure yet. (Btw, so when she threatened to squash him with a hammer if he didn’t drink the “permanent” shrinking supplement, she was just trying to stop him from shrinking any further, since it's technically not really “permanent” because there’s still an antidote, right?) I just feel bad for Heather because she truthfully believes she’s a good person and she’s doing the right thing, but at the same time, she’s still dangerous. I wonder what’s really going through Ben’s mind right now though, because something tells me he has a trick up his sleeve. Also I wonder what she did with Jason?
Again, great chapter! You’ve literally got me hanging on the edge of my seat now! I’m low-key sad that you say it’s coming to an end soon because it’s just so freakin good! D:
Author's Response:
Your comment really nails all the various points about her character. I'm working on five alternate endings right now that push each character slightly in one direction to see what end result it produces.
Heather isn't Carter's biological daughter, but she wasn't necessarily lab grown. She could have been an implanted embryo carried by a surrogate. I have a bit more of her backstory and Carter's in my mind, but I'm not too sure it's actually worth spelling out every last point.
Heather threatened him because she desperately wants him to submit to her authority, and conventional methods just weren't working. Like Jason, she actually does want Ben to freely choose to submit to her. He just wasn't choosing what she wanted. So she fucking flipped out.
[Report This]Date: March 02 2019 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Stowaway
Amazing
[Report This]Date: March 02 2019 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Ring
Let me first apologise for leaving a review only after 20 chapters have already been published. I have been following your story since its beginning and was increasingly impressed by its quality. Although most chapters are shorter than I usually prefer, you skillfully balanced plot, character development and kinky stuff, so denser division presented no pacing issues. Your writing style combined with gripping storyline resulted in an engaging story, updates of which I anxiously await not only for its size-related content, but out of sheer curiosity how your protagonists' fate will unfold.
What is worth mentioning, your story is quite bold and on the kinkier side of things (even considering the website you are posting it on) and delves into some underexplored areas. As original concepts and unorthodox thinking should be rewarded, a deserving 10,5/10
Author's Response:
Thank you, that really means a lot. I expect to have the story fully wrapped up by the end of this week. Hope you enjoy.
[Report This]Date: March 02 2019 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Reunions
Great chapter! I guess Jason isn’t so bad after all. But I’m with Ben, I don’t completely trust him right now either. Maybe he his past relationship with Heather is clouding his judgment, because he’s acting a little delusional at the moment. Although maybe seeing the monster Heather is becoming with his own eyes will snap his head back in the game. Also I love this new badass Ben and his relationship with Jason now lol. Although I low-key miss Ben unconsciously worshiping Jason and Jason’s god complex too. Jason dominating Ben in every way was kinda fucking hot tbh lol.
I’m loving were this story is going and I can’t wait for the next update! Amazing work so far!
Author's Response:
We're nearing the end, but don't worry. This story could've gone in multiple branching paths, so I've planned several different endings and a few "what ifs" to boot. Hope you enjoy.
[Report This]Date: March 01 2019 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Stowaway
AYOOO! Looks like my theory was correct lol. And, YAY, Ben finally got someone’s attentions! Now let’s see if Jason will let them both grow back or will he keep his 2 new little pets/worshipers like this forever…? ;) lol
Author's Response:
Good guess!
[Report This]Date: March 01 2019 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Supplies
Holy hell, that was a great chapter! Probably one of my top favorites so far tbh. I really loved all the body exploration of Jason, and Ben’s size comparison to him now as a human speck. I especially love how Ben unconsciously Jason as a fucking god.
Also I have a developing theory: Jason’s not as bad as he appears, or maybe he had a change of heart. Anyways, now he’s genuinely concerned about Ben’s safety with Heather, and maybe he’s helping save AJ who has also been shrunk by the powers-at-be at AllTec. Maybe that’s who he was talking to before he left for work, and maybe that’s why he’s sneaking around for growth supplements because he’s actually trying to restore AJ?
Just a theory. Or maybe he really just trying to turn himself into an unstoppable giant first, and that wouldn’t be all bad either, because I agree with ben, Jason would really make the perfect god ;) lol
Date: March 01 2019 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
I look forward to more of your writing.
[Report This]Date: March 01 2019 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Supplies
This chapter was amazingly well detailed and written! I do wonder what was the conversation they had last chapter? I guess well find out soon enough. Glad to see Jason's finally going for it. I'm wondering what'll happen when Jason and Heather find out where he is? Thanks for the update glad to see your back :).