Date: January 25 2019 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
I'm loving the pacing of this story. The intro has me intrigued and these initial chapters have me hooked! Can't wait to see how the story develops!
Author's Response:
Good! Got a lot of plans for this one.
Date: January 24 2019 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Great story idea and cool characters, looking forward to seeing where it goes. Thanks for writing!
Date: January 24 2019 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Love this story so far can't wait to see what you have planned next!
Date: January 23 2019 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
great story!!!
I wanted to make a great potential joke...but someone beat me to it!!!
hope to see more soon!!!
Date: January 23 2019 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Ends
I really love the concept, and I can't wait for the next part :D
Date: January 23 2019 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
It’s like you scraped this premise straight off my brainpan. Love the characters so far. So looking forward to more of this.
Date: January 23 2019 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
I have been browsing this site for 9 years and I just made a account just to give you a review. (That alone should say a lot)
You're off to a great start this story has A LOT of potential. Ive been wanting a story with this premice for a long time. (If only I was as motived as you lol) Do keep it up, Dont let this be another one of those one chapter wonders.
Author's Response:
Wow. That's a wonderful compliment. Hope I don't disappoint. I intend to finish this one but not sure how many other stories I'll have time to write subsequent to this one. Hope you enjoy.
Date: January 23 2019 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
wonderful setup!
Date: January 22 2019 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Promising start. I like that Heather seems all for the treatment, while Ben is more apprehensive about it. Then the possible strain it may put on the relationship if one of them was compitable and the other wasn't makes me interested in how things will transpire.
Date: January 22 2019 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Very curious to see where this goes.