Reviews For Monica's shoes
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Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2009 7:12 AM Title: Back to Monica's Shoes

awesome story

Reviewer: Tinywulf Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2008 8:56 AM Title: Under Her Shoe

Wow, some really sexy stuff in here, especially the humiliation.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I appreciate that. I did aim at putting some psychological degrading stuff in there. Comment appreciated.

Reviewer: rubber Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2008 11:22 AM Title: Survivers

chapter 7 was great

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2008 5:58 AM Title: Revelation

this story is really cool and it keeps getting better and better

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2008 6:57 AM Title: The Shoe of Monica

amazing chapter

Reviewer: Vord Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2008 3:51 AM Title: The Shoe of Monica

Excellent chapter and well-written!!!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot, I appreciate that.
I don't mean to toot my own horn, but I gave myself a pat on the back for the Stacy part.

Reviewer: fairway1 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21 2008 12:34 AM Title: Under Her Shoe

Yeah, I know I don't write much at a time and I don't write very often. I guess I should write a story and complete it before I submit it. Thanks for the constructive criticism.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2008 5:46 PM Title: Throwing a knuckle ball

Good story. I just wish that there was more. At less than 1,000 words per part, this story is progressing a little bit at a time.
But keep it coming - more detail descriptions...

Author's Response: I'm making the next chapters longer, it seems that is a common request. Description is a must, I felt that I did a good job in the first chapter but have since grown lazy; it'll happen.

Reviewer: Nigma Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2007 6:50 AM Title: Under Her Shoe

an excellent story, i look forward to seeing more of it

Reviewer: Knightofdawn Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2007 2:16 PM Title: Under Her Shoe

I must say I defently like it, hope Monica figures out he's well human and not a bug. We'll see^_^! Good stuff keep it up!!

Reviewer: andy2283 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2007 7:24 AM Title: Under Her Shoe

Haha very good story. I wonder what will happen next? Will he ever find a way back to normal? Seems like the entire universe is against him. I will keep watching for future installment.

Reviewer: fairway1 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2007 1:22 AM Title: Under Her Shoe

Thanks for all your reviews, they've boosted my confidence to continue. I only hope I can write the rest the same way.

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 01 2007 5:34 PM Title: Under Her Shoe

excellent start, some good descriptions. i hope you continue it. I always like a good unaware story.

Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2007 7:16 AM Title: Under Her Shoe

This is really great! I'm enjoying the story alot. I can't wait to see what happens next to him. You've done a great job with this story. Thank you!

Reviewer: Vord Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2007 3:09 AM Title: Under Her Shoe

I like this... In fact, I love this. Keep this story up, great start.

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