[Report This]Date: June 27 2020 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: Blood and Mud
Also, gotta add: It's amazing how you've managed to pull this much amazing story and world building out of a single drawing. You've got quite a wonderful literary imagination.
[Report This]Date: June 26 2020 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 8: Rain and Pain
Missed this story until this most recent chapter popped it back into most recent. It's fantastic, and the pacing is perfect. Loving it.
Author's Response:
I appreciate your feedback, Jimbob! I'm glad you are still enjoying it, thank you!
[Report This]Date: June 26 2020 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 8: Rain and Pain
Absolutely wonderful! I really enjoy the dialogue, pacing and plot development. I've enjoyed the entire series, and am utterly fascinated with where things go from here. I'm also curious as to why they're after Daedra, though I do have a few ideas. Thank you so much for the story!
Author's Response:
Stay tuned and all will be revealed! :D
I appreciate your review and thanks so much for taking the time to write your feedback!
[Report This]Date: May 27 2020 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 1: Blood and Mud
Dude. Please don’t stop writing this.
I know this website is mainly meant for erotic stories.
But I am so caught up with your characters that I am left wanting more.
Author's Response:
Rest assured, dear friend Rapha, I haven't stopped writing! In fact, here soon, I should be able to write lot more often!
Thanks so much for your great comment, I'm really happy you decided to leave it!
Date: April 29 2020 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 7: Knowledge and Power
I'm glad you're continuing this! Its absolutely amazing and I like how this story is going. Another wonderful chapter!
Date: January 21 2020 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 6: Knives and Lives
Just found this story. I don’t understand the way you set these two characters up with her seaming to be stronger than a small army and willing to kill people but yet needing money for food. It seems really forced to me. But I don’t really care that much. I just love seeing the interactions between the two and can’t wait to see where this goes next
Date: January 01 2020 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: Blood and Mud
God how i've missed your stories lol
This and "we fall together" are still 2 of my top favorite tales here on the site right now and it's a massive relief to see you haven't abandoned them
Happy new year!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind message MadHatter! It really means a lot to me that readers enjoy what I love to write. I'm really motivated when I hear people are excited for whenever I post a new submission to the site. Thanks again for your review and taking the time to say something so nice!
Date: January 01 2020 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 5: Enemies And Worse
I'm glad to see thos story wasn't abandoned! Keep up the great work!
[Report This]Date: February 19 2019 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 3: Lions and Mice
Wow you are doing a great job of building tention in this story. We dont know what she means when she asks who he really is. We are witnesing secual tension develop between the two more and more, and theor is an impending climax of them reaching the slave traders. I can't wait to see of she is savage enough to ignore her feelings and sell him or if she will and have regrets. She seems like one of the strongest in the forrest so I wonder why she struggles to get food. I loved the tortured slowly developing relationship in we fall together and I think this one might be even better since she doesn't have anyone to stop her from hurting him this time. Chapter 4 cant come soon enough
[Report This]Date: January 09 2019 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: Blood and Mud
I forgot about the rating.
Date: January 09 2019 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 1: Blood and Mud
The bad: minor spelling mistakes.
The good: pretty much everything else. Maybe that is the reason why even tiny imperfections stand out?
I have not written a review for quite a long time but your story demanded immediate attention. I have been following your other project from the beginning, it is one of my all-time favourites, so my expectations were very high. Fortunately, you served your readers a gripping pilot chapter and disappointment was the last thing on my mind upon finishing the read. I particularly like the way you balanced environmental details and fast action. The scene, although short, is extremely immersive and easy to visualise, the reader feels as though they had witnessed the events first-hand. And that is a feat rarely accomplished even by 'professional' authors.
The Prince is indeed a likeable character, a capable leader haunted by family issues and past he would rather not revisit... lots of potential for future development. Although we know nearly nothing about the Lady, I suspect she is not just a bloodthirsty monster who whimsically massacres encountered soldiers. Nevertheless, the relationship between these two is up for a rough start.
To sum it up, a great beginning to a new story. I am already looking forward to reading its next installment. Good luck!
C
Ps. English is not my native language, so I would like to apologise in advance for any mistakes you might find in my reviews. It is only fair, as I have just pointed out the few and unimportant ones in your work
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your in-depth review Curvograph!
I always try to write imperfect characters, and the reserved Eliphas is no exception. You'll probably have already found that I tend to write people more complex than the typical requirements for a story, but I enjoy exploring what makes people wh they are, especially their faults and what drives their motives. Thanks so much again for your review, and though its been nearly a year, I hope you're well and still enjoying what I submit.
[Report This]Date: January 08 2019 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: Blood and Mud
I'm a big fan of your other story We Fall Together (I'll be writing a long over due review on that later so keep an eye out for it), so I was eager to check out this new story. I enjoy the premise set up so far. While I don't know too much about the characters yet I know enough to find the Prince likable and a perfectly adaquet protagonist. He's skilled, honorable, and well-liked by his commrades so that speaks pleanty in his favor. The giantess sounds attractive and her abilities are just vague enough to keep me coming back to see more. Your synopsis of the story also has me invested, and I can tell you I'll be sticking with this one till the end.
I'm a big fan of fantasy stories, and you write them as if this is a real book, with great attention to detail and outstanding quality. I know this may be a shameful plug, but I'd love to have your professional opinion on a fantasy story I wrote myself, To Defy Gods. If you don't have the time then by all means don't worry about it. I'd personally rather keep reading your stuff instead.
Best of luck on both of your ongoing projects and expect future comments from me from time to time. Work of this quality deserves to be popular on this site
Date: January 07 2019 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Blood and Mud
Given one of the reasons I read your stories is because of the attention to detail, I will read just about anything you post my dude. I hope to see more of "We fall together" in the future, but a new story isn't a bad idea either! Just look at Vintovka lol, he puts out random but good little short stories all the time.
I got a few authors I will read any story they post just about and you are one of em so do what you want man!
Date: January 07 2019 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 1: Blood and Mud
Very well written
Author's Response:
Thank you, friend. I'm glad you enjoy the work so far!