[Report This]Date: December 23 2019 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Falling
As I had predicted, your story is very good. 5 stars indded. Loved how the main characters are clearly craving for each other, but find it hard to admit because of their sizes. Tloche thinks she is too big and groos. Pacho thinks he is too little and not enough for her. Beautiful.
I think jealousy would heat things up. For example: Tloche, to ease her urge, ends up having a one night stand with a co-worker, but it does little to nothing as the experience isn't near as good as the time she she had Pacho inside her. This leads to misunderstands and Pacho being jealous.
Then, we have Tloche other friends. Jablo aside, I think Trano might become a good friend of Pacho and a source of jealousy for Tloche and spice things up. Maybe she will find him on the ground and try to kill him at first, having a change of heart after communicating with him or after he does something unexpectedly good for her.
Well, thats it. I am now a fan of yours and will be waiting for the next chapter. Also added your story to my favorites. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Please, keep up the good work :)
[Report This]Date: December 22 2019 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Falling
It's almost a wonder Pacho didn't notice how much Tloche craves him. But then again, girls can be mysterious.
I'm wondering what the light under the bed will lead to. To something good? Or bad? I hope somehow Tloche gets what she wants.
Thank you for writing and I'm looking forward to the next one.
[Report This]Date: December 20 2019 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted
Wow! How did I not saw this story if it was first published in january?? Well, at least I have a lot of reading to do now. Liked the first chapter, specially the unique names. Also advanced some chapters and saw some cute romance parts. Loved it.
I am going to read somo more to make another comment... or comments, but it's almost certain I will love this one, so I am already giving it five stars to encourage you to continue the story ;)
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review! Be sure to check my other stories, including the erotic novella ‘Zava&Mark-The reckoning’ soon to be concluded!
Date: October 02 2019 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted
Glad to see you back, paisalandia! Well written chapter. Hope to see more soon!
Date: October 01 2019 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Solitary confinement
Glad to see this return. Really good chapter.
[Report This]Date: May 13 2019 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted
This is getting really good, I hope you haven't given up on it!
[Report This]Date: February 05 2019 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted
Great story! Really like the gentle interaction between the two characters. I look forward to your next chapter!
[Report This]Date: January 28 2019 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted
Great story, great interactions, awesome work!
[Report This]Date: January 27 2019 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 11 - FriendZoned
You are an amazing master at world-building, and the character development and relationship between the two of 'em is heart warming. I can't wait to read more of this wonderful story <3
Date: January 23 2019 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 11 - FriendZoned
Your descriptions of bodily functions are exquisite. I love how dirty Tloche's mind is and contrastingly how sensitive she is about respecting Pacho ( as she should be if you ask me).
I hope she meant she just wanted more of hum when she thought to herself that she was unsatisfied, part of the thrill for me with this fetish is the thought of pleasing a giantess, despite the size differential.
I digress, in summation, the "dirtiness" of this chapter makes me happy. Bodily functions are sexy. I applaud any others who feel comfortable enough to think likewise.
[Report This]Date: January 22 2019 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted
Love the story are we going to get more of the other two, missing Melina and Zara... Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Hello BigDawg. Yes. Stay tuned for Zava's next chapter, coming soon!
Date: January 22 2019 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Schooled
Awesome update, as always. Give your writing a once over, minor spelling errors or miss placed words. Otherwise, great imagery and story. Interested what the next chapters title is suggesting. I've been hoping that Tloche and Pacho would explore possibilities together eventually. Hope that isn't crushed!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. The next chapter will explore those minor (in hindsight, but quite painful at the time they occur) misunderstandings of couples at at that awkward stage in relationships where closeness makes sex be on the brink of happening but no one wants to offend the other party, with a little role-reversal dictated by the slightly changed power dynamics here caused by the size difference.
Date: January 20 2019 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted
I've been meaning to leave a review of this ever since the first chapter wen t up. I really like how the women are written to feel very foreign in language and culture while still relatably human.
[Report This]Date: January 10 2019 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Talked
Superb story. I really hope Melina from that other story is actually some kind of powerful ruler that can put this tiny-hunting police in its place. I think these police women need some tiny man of their own.
But at least our tiny man is safe for now.
Thank you for writing!
Date: January 08 2019 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Frisked
I thoroughly enjoy how you incorporate bodily fluids, etc in a gentle way. Most of the time they are described as tortureous for the tiny person, and not in a sexual light. I believe that anything and everything about the human body is beautiful in its own way, and to see menstruation described in a non abusive giantess context really is uplifting to say the least. I wish there was more gentle giantess media featuring bodily functions, and I really wish more people were comfortable with it, instead of ashamed or disgusted by it. I find sharing such things between partners to be romantic and sexy as hell.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I always try to do things tastefully and as realistically as possible. You will see, however, no unnecessary violence and gore in my stories. As a former soldier, I saw enough massacres, and splattered remains of what used to be human beings. I do not wish to portray such attrocities in my writings, unlike some people in this fetish.
Date: January 07 2019 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted
Please more
Interesting story!
Date: January 06 2019 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Stashed
Looks like he's in quite the predicament.
Great job on this story, love the series you've made and this new entry is interesting so far.
Keep up the great work!
[Report This]Date: January 06 2019 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted
Interesting story!
Keep it up!
And thank you for writing!
[Report This]Date: January 05 2019 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted
Adoring this story so far. Can't wait to see where it will go from here. Keep up the good work.