It's truly hard to believe this is your first story, this is amazing! One of the best reads ive had on this site. Its the flow that stands out. I like how you emphasize the size difference whilst showing Lynn's naivety, who at first doesn't fully realize how big of a threat she is for the mortals. It's also quite rare to see a Giga Giantess interact with civilians like it happens here, and you honestly nailed It! Showing the genuine and playful nature of Lynn and highlighting the dissonance between her innocent intentions and the inevitable destruction caused by her.

Also lovely how you go into detail with the destruction moments, which are one of the most important parts as they help considerably in picturing a Goddess this big. Hope to see more emphasis given to stuff like unaware feet crushes and general destruction, because you did It beautifully here.

Great stuff, i repeat, one of the best reads ive had here, i've been browsing this site for like 3 years, and ive created an account now just to make this review. Can't wait to read more from you!

arm wrestling with a goddess? impossible

loved this story so much

really cool!

Sorprendente! Sei grande! 

As one who also loves Lynn innocent and unaware mayhem, I have to ask: she has no idea to have killed hundreds? Good. Now I want her to find out and cry just to find out even her tears are mass destruction weapons too Y_Y 

I am also a sucker for romances. You put giantess and romance together and I end up appearing sooner or later. So, can we expect anything of the sorts? Maybe a deep conection between our blissfully unaware goodess and Matt? Maybe some people will even blame Matt for her actions (he is the one guiding her after all) and try to get revenge on him in hopes of halting Lynn?

Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Added you and your story to my favorites. Can't wait for the next chapter on Lynn journey. Keep up the good work.

Lynn litterally means no harm, the problem is being miles tall she can't really interact or tell what her slightest movements are doing.  She's only starting to realize just what an overwhelming being she is and she doesn't have contast interaction to reinforce that learning.

Hoping that the realization that 'poor' worlds may make life small stirs in her some pity and further understanding.  Maybe (and likely with lots of trail and error and likely a couple million dead :-( ) she can help the 'little ones' make a better world.  She knows from her time with them that they are as smart as she is (hide and seek), it's just that they are so small as compared to her.

Also hope she becomes the world's sole goddess first by huge and glorious, then by by being huge and kind hearted and finally being giga, generous and godly.

Thank you for a great chapter!

Amazing story! You're great

Man the ending of this chapter was brutal, but I loved it. And even though so much death and destruction is caused by Lynn, she still has this sense of innocence to me. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response:

I remind the readers thay Lynn is a goddess, a powerful one at that. Maybe I went a bit overboard eh? Thanks for the feedback!

This is cool. I wrote a story about a gentle Goddess myself. I like how she interacts with the people below. I wonder what they are going to do to try to help each other?