Date: December 28 2018 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 1 (Preview)
Great story so far, I always like stories where the shrunken dude is immune to pain and injory, therefor taking away the need to be a pussy about everything.
Keep at it!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
I like that concept too, which is why I typically add it to my stories. I find it more fun when the tiny dude can take more risks. And it allows for the interactions to last longer too.
Take care!
[Report This]Date: December 25 2018 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 (Preview)
Cool story. I’ve never played ddlc myself, I’ve only heard of it so I had to do a bit of research lol. While you only focused on one girl so far I noticed you said Yuri’s boobs were best of all the girls. Does this mean each girl has an asset or talent they are the best at? Like Monika having the best butt. Anyway Yuri’s story was good and crazy, I know monika is last so I can’t wait to see who is next. Also are you looking for ideas or do you have the story planned out already?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
For Yuri, it was more because she was designed as the tallest girl. It's basically because of her general appearance. And less that certain characters had the best of certain body features.
If you are intersted, it is free, so all you'd lose is a few hours or so. It's a fairly short game.
I'm not certain about the general order, although I plan to actually have Monika make appearance between each character's route. So now that Yuri's is finished, there will be one or two chapters with Monika, before moving on to someone else.
And while I have some general ideas on what to do going forward, I always welcome general suggestions. Although I might not use them, so keep that in mind. But I do appreciate suggestions either way.
Take care!
[Report This]Date: December 11 2018 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 1 (Preview)
Also dude, you should have monica learn to make ramen, the best kinds have rich sea food, plenty of greens and some garlic...AND A GUN!
-Jojo's Bizarre Adventures.
(anime aside it was greate and please make more natuski and monika, my having some chest stuff would be nice, IK your centered around feet but change is nice.)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
I think the best ramen is made with tiny little tomato monsters that like pearls and jam... (I had to look up what you were referencing and I'm glad I did)
And I hope you appreciated the small amount of chest stuff in the newest chapter (Ch 4). And Natsuki will get her time eventually, at least after Yuri's part is all finished. And Monika will get her main chapters last, because sometimes you've gotta save the best for last.
Take care!
Date: December 11 2018 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 (Preview)
Wow, I'm really liking what you did with monika, and i like sayori and yuri, but monika is best girl. (when shes not yandree lol) keep it up :)
Author's Response:
Also, I'm glad you liked what I did with Monika. I couldn't let her not have any size content in the story until the very end, so I hope Ch 2 contained even to hold people over for with that.
And in this story, Monika has matured enough to not feel the need to go all that yandere anymore.
Again, take care!
[Report This]Date: December 03 2018 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 2 (Preview)
Lovely story. Unaware is one of my favorites.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Unaware is one of my faves too, which is why I focus a lot on it. Hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: November 27 2018 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 1 (Preview)
NATSUKI FIRST PLS!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
But as you can see, I wound up doing a fast one one everybody without really intending it. Monika first!
[Report This]Date: November 26 2018 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 1 (Preview)
Thank you thank you thank you! I've seen a small amount of DDLC giantess content around Writing.com but never a proper full story. I love the characters sure, but the setting is what makes it the PERFECT material for a GTS story, Monika's obesession, the alteration of files to try to win the protag's heart, and the general idea that nothing is "canon" since the files are already malleable.
Well written and true to it's source material so far, can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
I hope I can make a good story based around DDLC that accurately portrays the characters while still keeping it a fun size adventure.
Date: November 25 2018 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 1 (Preview)
Love Doki Doki,
and the way you included Monika into the story.
Personally my favorite is Sayori, but im excited for what your gonna do with all four girl. Hope to see what you come up woth for the next chapters
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
And I'm glad that you liked how Monika accidentally kicks off the story events.
I like them all, but I'm partial to Monika and Yuri.