Reviewer: Aliakbar Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2018 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice story soo far can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks again Alliabar! :)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27 2018 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 3

Always follow instructions. Follow the yellow brick road or else you face a lady bringing her beautiful heels down on you.
The lady uses a spatula to scoop up his remains and drops him in the trash. Littles are shown no respect. How do you describe the culprit when all you see are her ankles and below. Good luck with that.
I imagine standing there as the doors open and the Massive shoes of the Giantesses come pounding by you. So thunderously loud. The constant pounding of shoes. Karen was cool to grab his balls. Excellent idea.
Having tiny Andy to clean is kind of the waitresses. Punishing him for whatever is also cool.
Nice chapter,
Diesel

Author's Response: I'm glad that you're hanging in there Diesel.

This story I hope to make a bit more cerebral than some of the others.....

I am however having a blast writing it!

Reviewer: Clouder25 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2018 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story as usual! I read all of your last ones and they were awesome! 

I hope you still will update the sitter story, I am dying to find out what happened to the little guy :(

Author's Response:

Well rest asured that Sitter for the Summer is not dead.  I simply burnt myself out on it a while back.  What was it about Sitter that you liked so much?   Why was it different from my other stories?

If you can answer that one then perhaps my gears on it will begin moving again.   The next chapters were going to have little GTS interaction in order to set up the rest of the story.. Do you feel the story could have survived that drought?   This was and still is a concern of mine to this day.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2018 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved Mrs. Gunkle offering to help and then reaching in and taking what she wanted. She a cool character. Little Karen always answering with Ma'am to show respect. I was brought up myself with answering ladies with Yes Ma'am to show respect. Still do. It's also interesting that little Karen has her own tiny person at home. I liked her giving out a spanking. It immediately shows whose in charge. Unlike most people Karen is kind to her little one. It is funny that some littles would be cruel to their tinies after they are treated poorly by the biggest people. Greatly enjoyed her feeding him the berry and taking it away when she felt that he had enough. Getting some milk is also a treat for him.
Cool chapter and a nice continuing setup of characters.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

I figured if a lady held all the cards like Karen does over Edward, a few good swats on the behind would not be beneath her and might actually be done more out of love and keeping him safe, rather than wicked spite.

I'm sure I too would use yes Ma'am if the lady was over 140 feet tall too!

I indeed plan on making Karen and Edward sweet on each other as there must be a nice dynamic to such a brutal story too.  Many aweful things are ahead for Karen though, and perhaps the both of them.

I think by obsevering people over the course of my life and how people quickly adopt the temperments and customs of their parennts or managers that people weaker morality people would just naturally fall into the abusive patternes that they have seen and been made privy to.

 

Thanks again for the great review Diesel!!!!!!

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2018 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Please forgive my review as I am under the weather. The initial set up was quite good. I liked that the English captured their own tiny people and eventually in their greed awakened a sleeping giant or Giantesses as it has become. I also love that the Giantesses keep the Lilliputian's as pets also. They are so small and it's fun to watch them build their tiny world. The englishmen have gotten what they and the rest of the world deserve. Great setup Crocodile.
Enjoyed the first part,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thanks again for a wonderful review Diesel! 

Drink lot's of Sprite soda (for some weird reason it seems to be the only beverage that takes the edge off of the flu), and eat lot's of chicken noodle soup.   This has been a particularly nasty Fall with so much rain just like the Summer.

Get well soon as I hope to hear from you as to what you've noticed and liked about my story.  I always look forward to what you have to say on matters. ;)

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2018 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 2

While lots of writers have done their own spin on Gulliver, this is one of the best and most fully realized versions I've read. Great world-building in these chapters. Quite a strange dynamic that humans can hold jobs and make minimum wage but can also be eaten without any consequences. Sort of a twisted take on the prejudices and inequality of our own world.

Author's Response:

That's exactly what it is..  Borrowing from slavery lore that I'm acquainted with on that account.  Putting vore into a story and making it plausible is often times much more difficult than most vore fans realize.   For example, most ladies and even men wont eat something that looks and acts like they do.. The circumstances have to be either extreme, i.e. starvation survival, or cultural as with cannibal tribes and/or legendary Giants in fables..  So, this is how that strange dynamic came about in this story as many of mine don't even touch vore on account of the above reasons I've given.

I figured a Steam Punk world too because I haven't seen it tried in this community ever!  And I've read just about all of them.   With a alternative technology I figure I'll be able to come up with a lot of doozies. ;)

Thank you very much for the thoughtful review Pixis. :)

Reviewer: lord_ne Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23 2018 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story is looking really good! Can’t wait to see the next chapters.

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot Lord_ne.. I'll see what I can do.