Date: November 19 2018 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 7- Man vs Giantess
Brilliant story so far!!! Look forward to more interaction between Talitha and the tinies. (Loved the part where she forced her nipple onto the boy, although I would have preferred it be a grown man)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoy it sir :) Look forward for the final 2 chapters coming by this/next week.
I have plans for another story that relates to the universe of this one.
Date: November 17 2018 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 7- Man vs Giantess
Good cliffhanger as things start to fall apart for the heroes. Talitha's giantess flatulence acts as a reminder to Jack of the boys still in her digestive tract, and the fact that he will likely soon to joining them. At her size there's no no way he can outrun Talitha, hopefully Charon can pass him some sort of protective amulet or something before he's swallowed, to protect him and the others from the heat, pressure, gases, and acids as they travel through Talitha's innards. Jack seems to be going from hero to Jonah, traveling through the giantess' innards as punishment for his overconfidence, a trip into Talitha's digestive tract could humble the hero. Talitha could maybe make a getaway with the with Jack and the others in her digestive tract, and maybe Mason or the princess in a "king Kong" like scenario with the good guys thinking she's won.
Author's Response:
To be honest, i have no idea how i should finish this story in a proper way. You have given some good suggestions however and have sparked some ideas in my head. I hope that i can write out a finale to this story which you will find enjoyable :)
Date: November 17 2018 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 7- Man vs Giantess
I'm always a sucker for a high fantasy setting so I've enjoyed this. Talitha's primitive wild woman personality definitely makes her feel like a classic fairy tale giant. Her unpredictable nature and voracious appetite has been pretty sexy. I'm not a big fan of the frequent focus on her asshole but eh, can't win them all. Other than that stuff not really being my bag, this is a fun story.
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed it sir :)
Yes I agree that Talitha's character as a more classic fairy tale giant is a more fun and interesting one which is why I set up this story in such a mediavel fantasy setting. I personally find stories with the typical modern~day giantess setting to be boring as I like stories that give me a temporary escape from life (which is what giantess stories are about)
And I apologize if the asshole~focus of this story is too much for you as I understand that not many enjoy it as much as I do.
Date: November 13 2018 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 6- Jack fights the Titaness alone
I'm kind of hoping Talitha gets a temporary victory and swallows Jack when he screws up somehow, and the rest of the hereos have to deal with the drama of the hero in the villianess' stomach along with William, Peter, Gregory, Joseph, and Francis as she makes a get away with them in her stomach. A "in the belly of the beast" cliffhanger. Talitha's anus seems to come under attack a lot for comic effect. It's funny to the characters until you realise that that's where the partly digested bodies of her victims come out of her from.
Author's Response:
I don't know how but what you are hoping for is indeed what i have in mind for the next two or three chapters.
Yes, as you hoped, Talitha will get a temporary victory because Jack got too confident and screwed up while fighting the titaness. As a consequence of his mistake, he will end up in her belly and will need to figure out a way for him and the little boys inside to escape.
NOTE: However i wont be able to publish the new chapters this week as i am currently facing the final exams of my final semester so i wont have time to write.
I ask that you wait patiently till my exams finish and i promise to finish the story by at least next week.
[Report This]Date: November 12 2018 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 6- Jack fights the Titaness alone
Nice story. Talitha seems quite the hungry huge girl, which makes following her not such a smart plan.
Also, how tall is she? It seems that she is way taller than 100ft. She is easily taller than the trees.
Thank you for writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your positive reception and I'm glad you enjoyed the story sir :)
Talitha is in fact 100ft tall. The trees of the forest are on average only about 24 ft tall ( which is about the height of a 7m tall house with two floors, I would know as I am an architecture student :D ). So in comparison to the huge 100ft Titan, Talitha, the 24 ft tall trees only reach her knee height.
The much larger trees within the Stonehenge mountains however are easily three times bigger than the trees outside, making them around 70~80 ft tall, which makes them almost as tall as Talitha herself. The taller trees reach the height of Talitha's neck, which makes her head pop out as she walks past the huge trees.
Date: November 12 2018 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 1-The mountain of a woman: Talitha the Terrible
Nice going so far
Author's Response:
glad you enjoy it :)
Date: November 12 2018 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 6- Jack fights the Titaness alone
Great story sooo far keep going
Date: November 06 2018 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 3- Talitha the Terrible attacks the royal palace
Interesting scenario, a feral, uncivilized wild woman giantess causing trouble for a small kingdom.
Just a bit of a inconsistency about Talitha's size. It's said she's 100 feet but in the first chapter she swallows 30 people whole, to do this she would have to be a lot bigger, at about 100 feet a giantess would only be able to swallow one person at a time, it would be like swallowing a skinny pickle. Maybe Talitha is bigger?
Jack causing Talitha to panic when he goes into her anus is funny, but I don't know why Talitha didn't just use her anal muscles to fart him out or squeeze him out like a turd instead of panicking.
I can pretty much guess that the poison isn't going to kill her just badly irritate her digestive system, adding to Talitha's misery.
It seems that her skin is too thick for sword or arrows to have much effect, so that leaves her insides as her vulnerability. Maybe Charon can cast an invulnerability spell on Jack, and trick Talitha into swallowing him. With her soft insides under the threat of Jack and his dagger as he stays and passes through her digestive tract, Talitha can be forced to submit under the pain and threat of having her insides cut as long as Jack stays inside her going through her.
Author's Response:
Ah, yes. Now that you mentioned it, 30people in her mouth didn't make sense... I will edit and change that part of the story. ( Do excuse my inexperience as this is my first time writing a giantess story )... but thank you for putting this to my attention kind sir :)
Also it wasn't Jack that entered her anus but in fact an actual rat that got caught up in the debris of the crushed house. Which is why she shrieked at the sight of it and panicked to get it off her body.
And let's not forget about the other magical weapons Smith is currently crafting, perphaps something more powerful than the glowing dagger?
And as for the poison... a very good guess sir :)
Date: November 05 2018 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 2- The woman mountain chases her prey
great story! love the description of her giant asshole, hope talitha decides it feels so good to have tiny jack suffer in her asshole and what it produces!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it sir :)
Do keep in mind that in this story, I'd like to give a fresh twist where the giantess is portrayed as not all mighty and unstoppable.
The agile young knight Jack, with the help of his friend, Smith the blacksmith, and his trusty assistant ,Charon the mage, will surprise the mountain of a woman that size is not everything. And that the bigger you are, the harder you fall :)
[Report This]Date: November 05 2018 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 2- The woman mountain chases her prey
HEY! Not bad, not bad! So far I'm really enjoying this. Tabatha kinda doesn't seem entirely evil per se, she's like an animal. Wild, untamed, and not raised properly. She sees tiny creatures that fit in her mouth and are tasty and easy prey? What animal wouldn't eat them? It's hard to fault her, but of course if the humans can kill her they should, she's a predator and kills many.
Author's Response:
Thank you and i appreciate your positive reception kind sir :)
Yes i would like to take a new fresh take on our perceptions of a traditional giantess: all powerful and mighty, able to do whatever she wants to without anyone being able to stop her.
Instead i find it a more interesting story to have a clumsy dumb giantess who is able to be subdued and defeated by tiny people brave enough to stand up against the mountainous threat. Just imagine the possibilities :)
Date: November 04 2018 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 1-The mountain of a woman: Talitha the Terrible
We all fans will keep supporting you sir
Author's Response:
Thank you for you support kind sir :) do reread the first chapter as i have edited it due to accidentally posting an unfinished chapter just now
Date: November 04 2018 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 1-The mountain of a woman: Talitha the Terrible
Plz write more chapters
Author's Response:
yes i will try posting when i can. I am currently a college student so it may take me some time to post but i will do my best :) pls reread the first chapter as i have edited it due to accidentally posting an unfinished chapter just now
Date: November 04 2018 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 1-The mountain of a woman: Talitha the Terrible
Good job sir well written .u can add a good love story between a knight and a giantess and how she becomes a good one.also please bring in the xxx part hehehe
Author's Response:
i thank you for yr kind remarks and am glad that you enjoyed it sir :) do reread the first chapter again as i have edited and have added more content into the first chapter as i posted the unfinished chapter by mistake just now. As for your request for a change of heart for the giantess i will see what i can do about that, and for the xxx stay tuned for the later chapters :)