Date: December 21 2018 10:52 PM Title: The Twist
Hope you havent given up Hyde's story, I still check every now and then >.<
Author's Response:
Fear not, I haven't. It's not a writer's block thing either, the world and characters are still very much active in my head. Pesky real life gets in the way though. I've made the first 3 chapters so far in the next 'act' of the main series, and I have another chapter in mind for this one, so hopefully I'll be able to churn something out soon.
[Report This]Date: November 13 2018 10:52 PM Title: The Twist
Excellent first two chapters.
I really like your writings but in the main Tales of Miss Hyde, I was really turned against Valerie as a character when she ate her best friend without remorse. Here she did the same sure, but the fact that Crystal survived make it all better to me.
I think I would like to see Val publically start a trend of peoples keeping shrinkees as lover, only to hunt down and kill other shrinkees, while being extremely protective of Crystal, to exacerbate the "Hyde" and "Jekyll" aspect of her.
Date: November 13 2018 10:30 PM Title: Familiar Faces
Nice staory. I enjoyed it. Hope Brittany actually did swallow her, and she has to go all the way through again, and not have the miracle escape seen on some other stories. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: November 06 2018 6:38 PM Title: The Twist
Super glad to see this version. I loved how careless Val was in the first version, but having Crystal around longer to fall lower is so much more satisfying. Keep it up!
[Report This]Date: November 01 2018 5:49 AM Title: The Twist
What SHOULD have happened to begin with ;)
Date: October 30 2018 11:55 PM Title: The Twist
Yay more Val action. And yeah wow how did Crystal survive? Anyways glad to see you writing more from this universe.
Author's Response:
The commissioner wanted an alternate reality, one where it turned out Crystal would be 'invincible' once she shrunk. Crystal being smaller, in this universe, makes her more dense and makes her a lot tougher than a typical person should be. And her body 'rewinds' if she ever, say, suffocates... she'd pass out then eventually her body would restart itself and go back to a previous healthy state, oddly like a computer, which is why she was able to survive in Valerie's bowels all night without air :D at least, that's my take on it.