[Report This]Date: December 20 2018 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 2 - A Secret Mission?
Like the set up and you captured the characters well, great follow up on chapter one. Wendy seems to like Earth's space program wonder if her curisotity will have any impact :-). Great work keep it up!!!
Author's Response:
Yes, Niall probably showed her a docu about it. ;)
Hope I can write chapter03 very soon. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: November 01 2018 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Humans, Pets ?!
Found this after looking at your other Story, good start keep it up and as with Island. WE WANT MORE!!! '-) Keep it up and Thank you.
Author's Response:
Yes, this also will be an interesting story and thank you for liking both these stories so far. There will be more on both stories and no unexpected unsatisfying rushed endings.
[Report This]Date: October 29 2018 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Humans, Pets ?!
Its nice to see a Titan story on this website again. I thought they moved away and made their own site... with blackjack and hookers.
I also remember the Titan: Physics story and these characters, so its nice too see these characters back in a story. Thanks for writing and see you next time!
Author's Response:
They indeed have their own site. Titan:Physics I enjoyed most, but all the others were very good too.
Most of these chapters now are prologues just to get the story going and see the familiar characters and setting of Archavia and Avalon. Pryvani Taursus who puts everything in motion will also make her appearance.
Thanks meereneten01.
[Report This]Date: October 23 2018 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Humans, Pets ?!
Intresting read, Good view on Wendy, she's a bit programed to be 'human are pets' but with character devolpment I think she'll get there. Please continue this story. Thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review, Last_one_33. Wendy's view on humans will be an interesting one over the course of her adventure. My first chapter is sort of a proloque and the second chapter too.
I have already written chapter 2 and parts of 3 and 4. They are interesting too read and understand, but it is to condense. I have to make them longer.
[Report This]Date: October 23 2018 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Humans, Pets ?!
I like the setup and the pacing, also it doesn't hurt to have a character name Wendy :-), keep up the good work. Will look forward to this and Island. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Bigdawg K. This story will have a lot happen in it. Thank you for supporting Island too with reviews. :)
[Report This]Date: October 23 2018 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Humans, Pets ?!
Very great start to your story, good to see her begginig to learn the truth.
Author's Response:
That indeed seems to be the case and how will this effect her. Thank you for the comments, cpgrad08.