Date: October 09 2018 2:58 AM Title: First appointment
Really enjoyable story with good characters and a nice setting.
I appreciate how this story is different from your usual style since is definitely gentle centered and I persoanlly hope it will stay like this (This does not mean that I don't like your other stories :) ).
Hope to read more from you soon and keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Yes indeed I made sure this story is more on the gentle side! thanks for your review!
Date: October 09 2018 1:54 AM Title: First appointment
Fantastic two new chapters. Her knowing right away is nice, and lead to some fun interaction. I look forward to you hopefully continuing thid
Date: October 08 2018 5:53 PM Title: First appointment
Just fantastic. Eagerly awaiting the next update.
Date: October 08 2018 12:24 PM Title: First appointment
Dude you are so good, we share same fantansy. I hope our dreams came true in near future.
Author's Response:
Hopefully, but int he mean time, fiction works best!
[Report This]Date: October 08 2018 7:08 AM Title: First appointment
Amazing story, especially your writing. Keep it up! Can't wait to read more of it!
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: October 07 2018 4:44 PM Title: First appointment
Hey, I think you made a mistake in the story.
Kelly answers that her 5 mile run is on Sunday at chapter 1 ‘I run 5 miles every Sunday mornings’ but at the next chapter ‘Saturday morning, knowing she had just told me that’s when she runs her 5 miles’.(the previous chapter also said she is going to book a session on Saturday).
Sorry if it is a misunderstanding on my part.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I'll fix it, thanks.
Date: October 07 2018 2:07 AM Title: First appointment
Thanks for all the great stories until now, from the aquarium,small Emily and many other stories you’ve made and I’ve greatly enjoyed most of them.This is a great story and amazing concept and I can’t wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, your review makes me happy. I'll post next two chapters together so it will be a good chunk.
[Report This]Date: October 06 2018 4:44 PM Title: First appointment
Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
The story currently has 12k words, I will publish next chapters soon.
Date: October 06 2018 11:18 AM Title: First appointment
I loved this! Such a cool concept, mixed with your good enjoyable writing made this a real pleasure to read.
I think in another chapter, something I'd like to see if Mrs. Allen kind of hooked on the smell, so maybe she purposely gets Kelly after one of her extracurricular activities so her feet are nice and ripe, but also get her massage barefoot. Maybe by saying she would prefer the feeling of skin to the sock, that's it's less scratchy or something, so that way she gets the bare feet.
Just a thought though. I'm sure whatever you come up with will be great, and I do hope to see another chapter
Author's Response:
The next two chapters are already written. Some of what you just said is already in but i'll take your other ideas into account.
Thanks for your review.
[Report This]Date: October 06 2018 12:43 AM Title: First appointment
Another great story Luidgi!
I really like the idea of a Client/Masseuse relationship
Loved the visual of Kelly casually smothering her with her stinky school socks as she pays more attention to her phone than the women beneath her feet.
Really excited to see Mrs.Allen let Kelly take control of her therapy!
Author's Response:
Thank you,. I had this idea while I was myself waiting for an appopintement and then how much I would have liked it to be that kind of appointement.