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Reviewer: GentleFan Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2018 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good start! My one note would be to try and make it more clear when you're changing POVs. It was hard to tell sometimes with all the "she did this to her" phrasing.



Author's Response: Thanks! That’s a good point. I was struggling with that but didn’t want to fall back on using the character names repeatedly. I’ll go back and make it better. Much appreciated!

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