[Report This]Date: October 15 2018 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
Love the story so far. I don’t know if you plan on making the main character really small or not but if so then an idea I had was have him so small that his mother’s thong string is a vast landscape for him. Just an idea to throw in some butt stuff. Can’t wait for the next chapter I’m curious what will happen at the gym
[Report This]Date: October 07 2018 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Total Exsemination
Loving it so much so far man, great work and thank you for making this! Hooked and looking forward to the next chapter haha if you were looking for ideas, maybe an unaware trip to work in mom’s shoes courtesy of bratty sister? 😂
Date: October 05 2018 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Milked
Just brainstorming: edit it so that you include a bit about a slightly stretchable property of his flesh due to his sickness. Then edit the throat scene to make it more visceral and invasive. Perhaps also add an edit about him needing deep tissue massages occasionally to counteract his illness. That could be played out as torture with Felicity's smiling encouragement versus body crushing massage in her hands/whatever. Both additions allow more complex scenarios he can realistically survive. Mom meditating w/ him at her folded feet. Later and smaller, she lets him sleep on her pillow and her face rolls over onto him, plastering him to her. Stuck in a hairbrush. Trapped/plastered behind knee while she sleeps. Sister trusses him up (very tiny) and ties him to mom's trinket anklet. Ear cleaner. Taped at toe section of shoe. Hid in jewelry box. Kept in dollhouse/playset. Human toering. Booger. Chewing gum. Cake decoration. Naked yoga? Eek. Much darker things too but I've said enough.
Author's Response:
We have some very similar ideas! There are a few of those things that you can expect to see very soon. I had planned to include more visceral and invasive chapters involding various body parts not often written about so that edit would really help and set the foundations for a lot of great stuff, it's what i needed to hear. I kinda want to talk about my ideas and yours but in the end its probably better if we keep it spoiler free here. Keep checking back in though, your comments are always great. thanks!
[Report This]Date: October 03 2018 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
You’re welcome Daftpunk for the feedback , also I do mean both tissue for nose blowing and toilet wiping.
[Report This]Date: October 03 2018 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
Somehow missed this gem when it was first uploaded but good lord am I glad that I read it. The parts with the foot warmer and 'grabbing the thread' were a fantastic idea. I can't wait to read more!
Date: October 02 2018 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
@amazonianniall True, having her shoving her toes into his mouth thinking its another object was seriously a top thing in that chapter!! From the smallest to the biggest!
Btw amazonianniall I remembered your name when I saw it. Your story Miss Smiths Revenge is also very good. I remember I reviewed it a few years ago, hope for it to be updated one day.
Date: October 02 2018 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Milked
So damn good! That she was shoving her toes into his mouth surprised me in the best possible way.
I love unaware so very much and this style, where they're mistaking the shrunken person for something else, is a particular favourite.
If you ever consider throwing some butt stuff in there, that's be amazing, but some unaware mouth stuff, which I think you've got in the works, would also be a great read.
Author's Response:
thank you! this is my favourite style of GTS story. I haven't set any limits on the story (although the story tagline kinda makes it sound like there are - gotta change that). I thought of a few ideas for butt stuff just now and i'm keen to hear your ideas!
[Report This]Date: October 02 2018 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Milked
Turning her son into a hot water bottle and being unaware at the whole process and even asleep still doing it.
Young Master you really know how to push my buttons, is this really your first story here because this is beyond my expectations and the use of words to immerse oneself in story and changing perspectives... we have something big in here. Do not drop, do not stop for 2 years like usually happens in many good stories.
Be the change. Become what you are meant to be!
FULLFILL THIS EPIC STORY TO ITS COMPLETED SELF!
Author's Response:
Haha thats awesome. I'm glad you're enjoying the writing. I will continue this fun project :D
Date: October 02 2018 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Milked
I wouldnt mind seeing some in shoe stuff. Maybe have him worn to her place of work in some flats or heels. Also maybe her kicking him off of the bed and getting unawarely stepped on then stuck to her foot while she walks around the house.
Author's Response:
There's something in the works for in-shoe lovers! Hopefully after a couple chapters it will be the right time to include it.
[Report This]Date: October 02 2018 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
My favourite kind of stories 😊
Author's Response:
Cheers mate. :)
Date: October 02 2018 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Milked
Loving this story daft punk keep up the great work , would you be able to include a scene where Jeremy is unawarely crawling across a piece of tissue which Eleanor (or Felicity) unawarely uses and possible include one of them pissing on Jeremy unawarely .
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words! Do you mean both kinds of tissue like nose blowing and toilet paper wiping?
Date: October 02 2018 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Milked
Wow! I love it, it's perverse and dark as F. Next? If it was me I'd have him get yanked from the waterbottle cover and found in the morning at her feet. Then I'd have her notice that his lips are chapped and slightly split, examining him she sees his tongue dried out and crusty. That would be the cue for her to insert a finger into his mouth to rub some medicine, thus torturing his psyche even more. What else? IDK... More shrinking obviously and perhaps discovering whats up with her feet. I am stoked no matter what you do!
Author's Response:
I think that idea is great! Definitely going to include that. More shrinking and wacky motherly love is on the way. (And a new character within the next couple of chapters!!!!)
[Report This]Date: October 02 2018 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
Nice edit of chap 1!
I really hope the little sister will torture her brother so he shrinks further.
Perhaps having her teasing her brother that if he shrinks too much she might gulp him up.. oh my!
Author's Response:
Yes he'd better watch out for her teen braces! they'd leave a mark for sure! She's out to get him.
[Report This]Date: September 27 2018 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
I absolutely love unaware, I hope that she ends up wearing him in shoe. Whatever you do I know it'll be fantastic. The last chapter so far is pretty amazing, thanks for a good read! My only complaint is that I can't get enough of it
Author's Response:
Just between you and me i am hoping to do some inshoe moments in the future! Thanks for the idea, keen to hear any others you have.
[Report This]Date: September 24 2018 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
Damn man! I haven't been this invested in a story in a long time. Any idea when the 4th chapter will be coming out? I cannot wait to see what happens to Jeremy next!
Author's Response:
I try to get a chapter done each weekend but if i have during the week i'll give it a go!
[Report This]Date: September 20 2018 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
Fav tags that story has without a doubts is unaware, feet and odor. It would be nice to have Slow Size Change, because with the nice setup you've done it taking things slowly would make it really enjoyable.
The way that the mother is so clumsy and it makes the main character suffer because of that is really really good. I'd love to see some in-shoe action in those worn out shoes/boots/sneakers that she has.
Author's Response:
i think you will really like the next few chapters then! i'll try to update this weekend
Date: September 19 2018 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Total Exsemination
You have something amazing going on here.. The elements that you brought here are in harmony and my lust is going up in a never ending spiral. I wish this to be a long story and hope it is updated every month at least. I loved it pls dont drop this.
Author's Response:
Thank you !!! I will update it soon! let me know what tags you like the most (feet/unaware/aware/ types of characters)
Date: September 16 2018 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
İ think you have found a very nice plot and your descriptions are good. Kepe up the good work! A part where he is in her slipper or stuck to the her sole by her sweat would be nice! And maybe some sadistic aware humiliations from some other relatives.. Anyway İ believe you will write it nice whatever you choose to wrire! Dont make us wait too much,yes:)
Author's Response:
Hope you're enjoying it so far! i will try to include some aware humiliations!
Date: September 16 2018 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
Your story has fantastic descriptions i love it! If possible, one of my favorite scenarios is if he goes up her nose unaware. I saw your nose tag, so i figured this was a possibility. Great job so far!
Author's Response:
I'd love to write about this scenario and i probably will :) In the next chapter i will leave some poll options for people to vote so i have an idea of what people like.
[Report This]Date: September 16 2018 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Total Exsemination
love your story. dont know if you're into this, but id love to see a scenario where hes less than an inch tall and he gets trapped under her asshole as shes masturbating and she farts on him and hes helplessly aroused.