[Report This]Date: February 03 2019 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 3 - True Darkness
Oh shit... O_O
[Report This]Date: February 03 2019 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Total Exsemination
Lets just hope she doesnt move in her sleep... ;) lol
[Report This]Date: February 03 2019 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
Intersting introduction ;)
[Report This]Date: February 02 2019 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 8 - A Milking
The last two chapters have really surprised me in how erotic you have managed to make them. You have taken a situation that to me would result in instant drowning if I would have wrote it and managed to make it plausible enough that I wasn't bothered at all. I hope Misaki has some time, but I hope this isn't it for his mother. I want to see more of Felicity, I guess because of how she has been Jeremy's tormentor for so long. She is right on the edge of becoming a goddess to him. Excellent, sir!
Author's Response:
Haha cheers! I'd like to introduce more characters and expand the world a bit so that should be fun to write.
[Report This]Date: January 11 2019 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
Forgot to leave my rating, I absolutely love this story and I was pretty upset when I thought it had been abandoned, I'm glad you're back
Date: January 11 2019 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
Id absolutely love some unaware foot action with misaki, maybe even some unaware crushing
Date: January 11 2019 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 7- Saliva Slide
Great chapter. I really, really hope the next chapter contains unaware vore. And that unlike this chapter Jeremy is not saved at the last minute. Especially, if not only is he unaware vored, but if he lives, and passes through, then after he is flushed you could use it taking him elsewhere to include more people. Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: January 11 2019 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 7- Saliva Slide
Glad to see the story come back, the chapter was great can’t wait to see more.
Date: January 11 2019 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 7- Saliva Slide
Amazing work as always! I have been waiting forever for this chapter!
Any idea when the next chapter will be released?
Author's Response:
Cheers! The next chapter is already planned out so it won't take long
[Report This]Date: January 09 2019 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
hopefully you havent forgotten about this. Would love to see it continued
[Report This]Date: November 13 2018 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 6 - That One Night
nice set up chapter. Love to see where it goes with future interaction with Misaki, and have it come out that she knowingly put her feet on Jeremy's face when he rolled over in bed (secret dominant side).
[Report This]Date: November 13 2018 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 6 - That One Night
You did a great job with the chapter!
I think introducing new characters is a good way to change up the pace of a story. And you integrated her into the story so that it all felt natural. The flashback was also nicely done.
I'd personally like to see more interactions with Misaki in the future.
Keep up the good work and great job on the story overall!
[Report This]Date: November 13 2018 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 6 - That One Night
Defiently wanting more of of Misaki
Author's Response:
cool thanks for reviewing!! check out the next part in 2 weeks
Date: November 13 2018 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 6 - That One Night
I'm digging it. Sure, I like Misaki, the more the merrier. Unaware generally frustrates me a bit, but I can tell you're more than willing to put your main character into some interesting and difficult to "mentally storyboard" situations. Hope the vacation is nice.
Author's Response:
I see what you mean. Luckily there is something for people who prefer aware GTS right around the corner. If there's parts of it in particular that you like feel free to request those.
Date: November 13 2018 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 6 - That One Night
Nice chapter. I liked Misaki. Is it bad that I hope that Jeremy, ends up swallowed, but lives. Especially if it is Misaki that does it, (possible if her and Felecity share the water bottle before Misaki leaves) I know the warning says mouth play, not vore, which means it probably won't, but I still like Vore more then mouth play. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
To be honest the tags don't really mean anything i just had to put some down at the start XD. I'm trying to cover a lot of GTS aspects eventually so i hope you hang around :D
Date: November 13 2018 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
More of the mom
Date: November 03 2018 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Dam Bursts
Still got me on the edge of my seat for the next chapter my man, keep up the good work
[Report This]Date: October 17 2018 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Dam Bursts
Very nice story! I'm really looking forward to seeing in which kind of situations the main character will get into.
As for suggestions, I already love some of the ones posted like tissue, nose, ear, being kept in a dollhouse, etc. Though for the most part, I would be happy to see butt content and lots of Eleanor. As for a new suggestion, something like being in a towel would be nice, or any other way to get him too close into some sweaty armpits.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the suggestions, There will be some sweaty armpits very soon!!
Also to anyone reading these reviews who is not a new reader, there is now a photo on chapter 2 or 3, cant remember!! :DD
[Report This]Date: October 17 2018 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Dam Bursts
Well now that’s an interesting twist. Id love to see it somehow where Jeremy gets his head stuck in the shaker, and his mom mistakes his head for the straw.
Author's Response:
I like that idea!!! Hopefully i'll have the chapter out tomorrow
Date: October 15 2018 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Dam Bursts
Nice chapter. I'm not sure what a shake, mixing ball is, but I hope that somehow, the mom ends up swallowing the son, yet he survives.
Author's Response:
Yeah i had a bit of difficulty describing it! I attached an image to make it clearer.