Reviews For Spring Broken
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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2018 1:07 PM Title: The Beach (cont)

Such a good story!

Seems like they don't stand a chance at these big girls.

I also like the way you describe the predicament of the tiny men. You make them seem really tiny!

Thank you for writing! 

Reviewer: teradonk Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2018 3:37 PM Title: Monday (cont.)

great chapter. i wish tiny mike all manner of humiliation, pain, and pleasure at the center of Laura's huge bubble butt.

Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2018 10:13 AM Title: Sunday

This is brilliant. I think you could work a little more on describing the perspective of the tiny people, what their world looks like and so on. That'll make the chapters a tad longer, but it will help the reader immerse as deeply as Mike has immersed in Laura's butt (sorry for that, lol).

But, again, brilliant. I'm loving this to bits and I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Breathe normally Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2018 7:35 AM Title: Sunday

im loving the story so far and am exited to see what happens to mike next :p

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2018 1:47 PM Title: Monday

I wonder who is doing the shrinking in this hotel. It seems somebody is delibaratly placing the vicitims on inconvenient places. Suspicious!

Very well written story. I always really like the descriptions of the scenes you give, it really displays the helplessness of the victims.

Thank you for writing!

Reviewer: Binary_Prophet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2018 2:00 AM Title: Monday

love what you have so far. looking forward to more!

Reviewer: 3l33thax0r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2018 5:40 PM Title: Sunday

Hyde and Holly got new chapters, and now you have a new story! All in one week! It’s like all my favorites decided to post at once! ^.^

Very much looking forward to where this leads, given the backside is my personal preference. :P



Author's Response:

Glad you're excited, hope I can give you a good read.

Reviewer: teradonk Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2018 9:56 AM Title: Sunday

a great hurray to see a new story from you. your stories are some of the best on the site, and this is no exception. lovin mike's situation under laura's bubbly teutonic ass, and emily, a woman with a big ass who loves farting (in a shrinking story), good lord take me home.



Author's Response:

Happy to hear people like it, hope to deliver!

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