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Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2018 6:11 PM Title: The one and only chapter

This was fantastic, very thoughtful and evocative. I like how it gets to the core of the action, the conditioning countering the last wisps of free will and self-awareness.

Reviewer: BabyZoe Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2018 4:58 PM Title: The one and only chapter

Wow, really great writing skills! You've really transformed the guy into a little morsel :)

Reviewer: Her-chocolatebar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2018 1:04 PM Title: The one and only chapter

Omg!!! Simply brilliant!!! This type of story is my favourite overall to read.
I hope to read more of this kind of material from your good self.

Reviewer: Itty-Bitty-Mini-Committee Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 08 2018 10:31 PM Title: The one and only chapter

Incredible work, dude. That sense of casual power is intense. 

Happy Vore Day!

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