Date: December 12 2023 12:38 PM Title: Rough Landing
This is my favorite story on this site. Please continue this amazing work.
[Report This]Date: August 08 2020 12:55 AM Title: Rough Landing
This is a pleasant surprise to see back. The premise has made for some beautiful and believable character dynamics as they navigate this desolate planet.
Although Isabel is cold and going too far in her distrust of Nathan, she doesn't come off as too cruel given the situation and the circumstances they met under.
Wesley is great at humanizing Isabel and is caught in a hard place knowing Nathan means no harm but is powerless to influence his stubborn sister whose already made her mind up.
Nathan is in the hardest spot of all, where he's more knowledgeable of the planet's perils, but can't get on Isabel's good side long enough to gain her trust to listen. Made worse as things stand, an escape attempt solidifies Isabel's distrust, his safety is not guaranteed with her, and even if he does escape his odds of survival alone are no better.
This story really instills that idealism in me as a reader to want to see them all get on the same page so they can use Nathan's knowledge and Isabel's size to increase their survival/escape odds.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the warm welcome back, and it's a nice surprise to see you leaving a review! I'm a fan of your work, although I've never been one to review much, but that will change.
Like I stated in the description of the story, this is one of my first true attempts at a narrative driven story. It's been kind of a challenge to try to write complex characters whose ambitions are more than just fetish stuff, but it's been fun! I don't want to say much that might spoil my future plans, but I will say I really appreciated your kind words. I've left many stories unfinished and abandoned, but I hope I can finish this one, I have big plans for it.
Again, thank you much for the review, and I hope to see your thoughts again in the future!
[Report This]Date: August 06 2020 10:57 PM Title: Dog Days
I have the feeling I've read another story from you, but can't remember the name. Anyway, just finished binge reading all 9 chapters and curiosity is killing me. What turned Isabel into a giantess? Will she turn back to normal or, maybe, get even bigger? Will Wesley stand up for Nathan against Isabel fears (and power trip)? Will there really be hope at their destination or only more despair awaits for the siblings?
What can I say? Please, more chapters! Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing your story with us. Five out of five stars for you!
PS. Sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words! I can tell you've got a lot of questions, unfortunately though, I can't answer them right now. But, rest assured, they will be answered in due time! Thank you for taking the time to leave a review, and I'm really happy you've enjoyed it so far!
P.S. Your spelling was fine!
Date: July 29 2020 2:56 AM Title: Grounded
Good to see you’re back. Can’t wait to see where this adventure takes this trio
Author's Response:
Glad to see someone still remembers me! Thanks for the review, and I'm excited to see where it leads as well.
[Report This]Date: July 18 2020 7:20 AM Title: Rough Landing
Loving it so far, would love to see more! I love the slight change of heart from Isabel. That pure anger/inflicting pain to subtle annoyance and silent admiring is a nice touch. Hope to see more soon
Date: January 28 2019 7:20 PM Title: Rough Landing
you got a good build up, good story so far keep it up!
[Report This]Date: January 22 2019 5:47 PM Title: Rough Landing
Seems like Isbella is starting to feel ways about things...(Nathan)
and even if that's true stop being the moody giantess and tell your brother you love him to (as a brother). Great story, thank you.
Date: January 08 2019 3:12 PM Title: Rough Landing
Very good
Date: December 21 2018 6:08 AM Title: Stranger Danger
Very interesting. I want to see where this goes.
Date: December 20 2018 1:33 PM Title: Rough Landing
great going, want lots more!
Date: December 20 2018 4:40 AM Title: Rough Landing
Nice going sir
[Report This]Date: December 20 2018 2:07 AM Title: Rough Landing
I’m enjoying the start of this, please keep going
[Report This]Date: December 20 2018 1:08 AM Title: Rough Landing
Woah... been awhile since ive seen u. Great story and cool to see you writing again, may have never reviewed back then but read ur work, good stuff.
-Ark
Date: July 30 2018 3:51 AM Title: Rough Landing
Very well written and an interesting start.