Date: August 01 2018 6:12 AM Title: Underwear Shopping
Nothing beats bra shopping ! Wonderful
Author's Response:
It'll be a while before I get to more breast stuff (probably), but please keep reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: August 01 2018 4:27 AM Title: Underwear Shopping
Great chapter. Got some shrinking in as well as some really sexy breast teasing. There's this fun air of anticipation in these shrinking chapters as both of them anticipate how much fun they'll be able to have. Glad Sarah wants to use all parts of her body to toy with him, and not just her feet or mouth. It's gonna be quite the ride once he's small enough to fit in all her places. 3 inches is always my favorite size because they're small enough to fit everywhere but big enough to actually meaningfully interact with the giantess.
Author's Response:
I hope I'm not overselling the anticipation or making it repetitive, the last thing I want is a case like Itchy and Scratchy's trip to the fireworks factory. They'll start doing more than just teasing at about a foot I think, which is a while off unless I get impatient and have him drastically shrink in one chapter, which is unlikely since I'm having a lot of fun writing this. Without saying what size he'll end up at, I can say it'll be bigger than nano-scale so they'll still be able to interact.
[Report This]Date: July 31 2018 2:21 PM Title: Dream State
You are adding chapters faster than I can review them, props for that!
Its nice to see Sarah finally growing to a more normal size in her dream, although it was a bit short.
I really liked the description of Sarah barely fitting her clothes and the "talk" therafter, well done!
Thank you for writing these chapters, see you next time!
Author's Response:
You can write a review for each chapter, I don't mind :P Thanks for the encouragement, and please keep reading/reviewing!
[Report This]Date: July 31 2018 9:29 AM Title: Breaking Fast
Another cute chapter of interaction and flirting banter. haha I don't want him to get "hurt".. but man, with all that vore flirting, when/if he's small enough, I want him to experience her stomach ;)
Author's Response:
Sarah's not that confident in her ability to vomit on command, what if she just tastes him a little? ; )
Date: July 31 2018 1:17 AM Title: Dream State
I am greatly enjoying the characters dynamic, and I'm looking forward to it eventually getting really small lol. Don't normally like slow shrink stories but I'm quite liking this
Author's Response:
I don't normally write slow shrink stories so this is unusual for us both. Glad you like it!
Date: July 30 2018 9:08 PM Title: Breaking Fast
Very good. I love 6 to 12 the best love a lil more breasts chat lol
Author's Response:
I figured from your name :) he'll get there eventually, and there will be a at least a couple chapters in that range, but he will inevitably get smaller.
Date: July 30 2018 9:04 PM Title: Dream State
Man you are setting up this dynamic so well. I cannot wait until he gets smaller and she can own up to some of these threats.
Excellent work dude ^^ keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks! They're definitely going to have some fun when he gets as small as she always joked about.
Date: July 30 2018 4:54 PM Title: Dream State
Continuing to enjoy the mix of giantess and shrinking. Hope when he gets small enough (or she gets large enough) that she makes use of her bare feet more!
Author's Response:
Gonna be honest, you shouldn't expect to see much barefoot stuff in this story or any of my other ones. The closest you'll get is socks and stockings.
Date: July 30 2018 1:19 PM Title: Pillow Talk
Really great story so far! I love the playful and caring dynamic between the two of them. And great job getting chapters out so fast.
Author's Response:
I was trying to hit that dynamic, glad to hear it landed! Hearing from the readers that they enjoyed it does help me write, and is the main motivator for getting stuff out so fast.
[Report This]Date: July 30 2018 7:53 AM Title: Pillow Talk
A nice chapter, though I do hope the meaness/violence remains the stuff of dreams between them.
Author's Response:
Thanks! And no worries, Sarah finds the idea of intentionally hurting the protagonist abhorrent, no matter how much she jokes about it or what their dreams are. The dreams are mostly a way of showing a negative "what if" scenario, and for me to write some cruelty and violence without affecting the main story.
[Report This]Date: July 30 2018 2:29 AM Title: Dream State
Another good chapter! Also, great work on putting out a new content so frequently.
Author's Response:
Thanks! The huge positive response in the form of reviews really helps drive me to add to this, so keep it up.
[Report This]Date: July 29 2018 2:47 AM Title: Movie Time
I really like where this is going, Keep it up!
Author's Response:
I definitely will, please keep reviewing!
[Report This]Date: July 28 2018 8:58 PM Title: Movie Time
Aww shit, things are getting crazy! I really enjoyed the slow build up this chapter.
And I've gotta say that it's super cool to see you try something a bit more playful and gentle. You're doing a great job at it, especially with the character dialog and interactions.
Author's Response:
Thanks! It's nice to do something besides having the tinies get smashed and eaten all the time, though that is also very fun to write.
[Report This]Date: July 28 2018 11:36 AM Title: Measuring Down
Well written and good fun. I love their relationship and look forward to seeing what they get up going forward!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Please keep reading and writing reviews, they bring joy to my withered heart.
[Report This]Date: July 28 2018 3:13 AM Title: Dream State
Well done, I like what this story is shaping up to be!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Please keep reading and reviewing, reader comments are the only reinforcement I get to keep going.
[Report This]Date: July 28 2018 1:04 AM Title: Dream State
Really enjoying this one so far, especially with how open they are about their dreams. Hope to see him get really small!
Author's Response:
He's gonna :) Keep reading and giving me feedback!
[Report This]Date: July 27 2018 8:54 PM Title: Measuring Down
Really enjoying where this one is going!
Author's Response:
Glad you're digging it, please keep reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: July 27 2018 2:02 PM Title: Dream State
I love the situation and the relationship between the characters. Looking forward to seeing where it goes.
Author's Response:
I'm glad this is getting a lot of support, and after reading some of your stuff that means a lot from you. Please keep reading and reviewing, I don't think you'll be disappointed.
[Report This]Date: July 27 2018 10:39 AM Title: Dream State
I just wanted to ask of you could make a story with some slower pacing and some growth in it, and here it its, even before I asked!
Sometimes I think descriptions of the doom/ending part usually could be a bit longer I think because all the tinies seem to die so quickly in your stories, but I thought that was just your style. There is usually so little description that I as a reader barely notice the "doom" and its over.
Your stories also read away nicely in general.
Like this story, with a quick but powerful plot setup at the beginning and good action.
Lets hope Sarah and our main character have many adventures together.
Also, Thanks for writing!
Author's Response:
With this story I'm trying to get a bit out of my comfort zone, and that involves taking it slow. I've been meaning to do a more playful story for a bit, and kind of did that with Dollhouse but that was a much quicker story. Shrinking is going to outpace growth, but that's just because it feels more natural to me - the POV perspective changes more drastically (if you shrink 5' you're ankle-height to everyone, if you grow 5' everyone's waist-height to you), and people are less apt to notice a 1" tall man than a 100 ft tall woman. Since the focus is going to be on the main character and Sarah, I'd like to keep Sarah crushing houses out, except maybe in dreams.
As always, you're welcome, and thanks for reviewing!
Date: July 27 2018 6:20 AM Title: Dream State
I think your descriptions are really excellent, and I love that you have woven cruel/playful and shrink/growth into a single narrative without it seeming forced. I really look forward to reading more and hope you will continue!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm trying to walk a fine line, and it's good to hear that it's working for now. Definitely going to keep updating this one, so keep watching.