Reviewer: GiantTirpsy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2026 9:40 PM Title: Obliteration

Hope you’re doing well. I have to be honest when I first saw the title of your story, I got genuinely excited, and reading it didn’t disappoint at all. The way you handled the inversion mechanic, the gradual scaling chain, and the psychological shift in Alexis from prodigy to inevitable tyrant… that’s not something most writers pull off without live play experience in a tabletop or roleplay setting. You made it feel organic, cruel, and hypnotic all at once.

I’m a paid artist specializing in turning written narratives into sequential comic pages, and your story immediately gave me strong visual pacing cues — panel economy, size contrast shots, even the slow zoom into Samara’s final microscopic perspective. So here’s my actual question as someone who genuinely wants to adapt this:

**If I were to turn “Alexis Soenso” into a 12–16 page comic short, would you want the shrinking logic and inversion rules displayed visually as a cold-open diagram (like a potion recipe page), or would you prefer the reader discover the cause and effect purely through character expressions and scale shifts, without any text explanation? Also, would you license the story outright for a paid adaptation, or would you want a collaboration split on the final comic?**

Looking forward to hearing your thoughts. You’ve built something genuinely memorable here.

*A fan and working artist*  

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