Interesting descriptions, paragraphs are a good length, lingers on exposition a little much for this type of story, but really good overall. Please keep writing!

Hey SomeRright, Welcome back! First, I was wondering if you were going to continue your story "Names" since it is currently my favorite of your work. I even left a review a while back that you never answered which I find funny since I thought you love reviews.

This story is also good. Not as good as Names for me, but it's getting there. I'm just not sure if I'm ever going to take a liking to Maddy since my only personal preference was that Maddy is not a Bbw. Otherwise, I love her age, her attitude and the relationship she has with Danny.

Another thing I like is how you go straight to the crotch stuff. That's my go to thing to read. Most of these got all this other stuff that I don't like, but you seem to know most of the things I'm into which makes me want to follow this story even more.

Maddie is a dominant but teasing giantess. I guess she is also naughty which I love. I enjoy her negotiations where she gives him a blowjob and then asks him to go down on her as if it's the same kind of task. She knows that she is making him work much more than her and I love how Danny doesn't even question it.

In addition, I like how your stories don't include too many characters, but instead creates a journey between the giantess and her little man. Sometimes a 3rd character is nice, but more than 5 can get crazy. Sometimes you see authors get bored and throw in a new character becuase they have nothing to write about. To me, keeping the same cast shows that you can make a relationship become deep only involving a small group.

That being said, I would love a skinnier, fit woman of the same age and attitude of Maddie to visit Danny sometime. Perhaps, not in this story, but just the thought of a woman like that makes me excited. You teased me back then in the "Names" story, but left us with a cliffhanger. I doubt you can add a woman like that in this story, but it seems possible in "Names" if you are willing to continue it. You even said you liked my ideas in my first review on that story, so who knows, maybe soemthing special might occur.

Furthermore, the underrated thing you got going is your dialogue. Not just this story, but all your stories. Your characters have great discussions and I love it when a giantess says they are going to do something, or even thinking about it. Sometimes I value the thought more than the action.

Next chapter sounds hot. Danny going to please her again. Love her attitude. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey! So, I do really have to apologize for failing to reply to either of your reviews. Bad timing on your part and a lack of diligence on mine.

Excellent to see you back here!  And my thanks to your client for this sticky, constricting freebie.  I've been waiting for this almost as long as Maddy has.