[Report This]Date: April 03 2020 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 14
really liked the idea!! This reminded me on an old cartoon I watched as a kid captain n.
[Report This]Date: April 03 2020 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really love this story? Any chance we could see Claire and Ashely run into Maddy again and have Claire use her again? Maybe she realizes Ashely did this to her but he won’t fix her or somehow makes it worse for her so guys will see her as a toilet like girls do? That was my favorite chapter chapter 12!
[Report This]Date: February 19 2020 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 13
I'm always so glad to see this story updated, and this chapter did not disappoint! Loved seeing Ashley back in action again and being crueler than ever, the little bit about 80% of Ashley's clothes being other people he had transformed was such a great idea! The build up with Toby is long but totally worth it, stuff like that is what makes me love your stories so much as you get a lot more attached to the characters which makes their eventual demise all the better.
I'm sure it's going to get even better next chapter, it would be amazing to see Ashley use and eventually dispose of Toby, but it could also be nice to see them having a bit more cruel fun together before Ashley does it. Here's hoping for some more ass/scat in the future too, those are always my favorite chapters from you. For how long this chapter is I didn't see that many mistakes, so you did a great job.
Also is the Discord server still up? The link is expired for me, I'd really like to join it.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review and sorry about the discord like, I thought I set the link to never expire https://discord.gg/AC87bgP
Date: February 18 2020 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
Togheter with the introduction of the new character, which is so great as Toby has a lot of potential for the story, I love this quick but interesting look at Ashely's psychology. Through the previous chapter one could think that Ashely's friends stand in some kind of "safe ground"... however this let us know that's not the case.
For Toby, I think he could be somehow reclutant in some way or another, but perhaps turning into a crueler version of himself as Ashely shows his gift... however, as Toby becomes more and more active he could be, unnoticingly, giving to Ashely the ideas of what to do whith him... that would be quite ironic XD... Toby being used with his own ideas XD
[Report This]Date: February 16 2020 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 13
very good not is was so much fun to read of the length but also seeing Ashley again in action. I missed him kinda during the past chapter. I would like to see this more often maybe if possible Ashley binding people to him and then let them fall in a very mean way totally him not giving a shit and even enjoying it. ashley should totally use toby in a cruel way. and toby has no clue.
[Report This]Date: February 16 2020 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 13
what a read! I always was a huge fan of your character and plot development and how you have this talent for building up. love the whole ashely got bored idea totally sitting there alone and thinking up what would kick his hornyness again and then by pure luck some bug went into his spider web. this is the entire thing of this story ashleys playthings right. I was a bit disappointed at the end that ashely didnt use his bug he cought in his web of physology, but then I read that you planed on doing so maybe in the next chaptr. I wouldnt want Toby become a ashley 2.0 I would totally want him to suffer not seing it coming and Ashely geting bored of him or something else. I enjoy this idea though a lot of you building up a new character over multiple chapters and then kill them off that makes me really horny actually thinking about it.
[Report This]Date: February 16 2020 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
Just read your answer, noo dont apologize hahaha. Your writing is incredible!! You are by far one if not the best writer on this site, period. I have to cry seeing all the bad stories on here, just short quikies with no plot, badly written, yikes. Your stories are like the Stephen King standard to that. I just saw a small number of minor, really really minor, mispellings here and there, like a missing 's' like at 'Oh yeah, they were good friend.' or a flipped character like jis instead of his or something. Dont you dare to apologize for that!! Not sure if you use Chrome, but you can activate its advanced spell check and then write the chapter for example in Google docs, and it is very easy to see little mispell errors with it in a minute or so. Dont you dare to say you missed up, you did NOT!!!
[Report This]Date: February 16 2020 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 13
I really enjoyed the idea of building some character up over several chapters and then let Ashley drop him in a very cruel way. I had the same idea actually before and wanted to ask this if it might be possible. The intro was really great to read even I disgree all those ideeas would have been very great and not boring at all. So I would totally would like to see Ashley turn on Toby like he actually had it in mind. I would love to see this happening to other characters too, but not the close ones like Phil and co.
[Report This]Date: February 16 2020 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
So amazingly long and so amaingly good... one of not the longest chaptest and I love it so much. The forplay was so thrilling, especially the entire idea of Ahsley manipulating someone into liking him and then... I honstly would love to see Ashely fulfill his first thoughts and turn Toby into something for the next chapters and totally betray him in the most cruel way. I would love to see Toby become some cruel stuff in relation to the football players Phil and no because of the nerd and the football players, maybe just becoming toilet paper for them to wipe their arse, or toilet, or condom for them and theit gf. Saw some little spelling mistakes here and there like his into jis or something, but nothing too bad. Incredible chapter!!
Author's Response:
Sorry about the misspells I gave up the accuracy for speed. I wanted to push this out as fast I could while trying to keep the errors as low as possible. Looks like messed up sorry.
Date: February 01 2020 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Uh?... where is chapter 12?... XP
[Report This]Date: December 16 2019 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
was a long wait but jusst had time to read your newest creation. full of love for it wished to see some male using too but still was really really hot no thats wrong word it was one of the best I read and I love it. I know how it is if work schedule overcomes hoe you put some free time into writing I missed your writing a lot. so happy you were able to put one ou before new year. thank you so much for this chapter!
[Report This]Date: December 09 2019 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 12
Toilet plots in general are my favorite and I am just loving the chapter, and entire plot. Too bad it was just f/f but still got me several times and this was one of the best stuff I ever read. Too bad youre having work schedule got crazy. Hope to see lots of more to come.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2019 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 12
fucking lit, just that, never read anything so good in along time. the idea is so good with someone being used as a toilet and they dont notice it and you told the horror part of it so detailed. was quiet some time since the last update was becoming a bit upset you may have been gone. so happy youre not. and this totally made utp for it. wasnt too much and I love your longer chapters. would had loved to read out the ending though of the mother taking a shit down her throut too. good day to you thanks for sharing and writing.
[Report This]Date: December 07 2019 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
incroyable... arse at its best. any hope for a chapter like this with mm?? what a damn good plot. I am horny since an hour reading now a 3rd time through this. I waited a long time for this story o continue and YES, love the new chapts. you didnt lose any of your skils during your time off. this is if not the best chapter of it all. the ending was perfect. too bad ashley wasnt part of using her too. or even maybe her boyfriend without realizing he wasnt taking a shit down her gf lol that would have been epic. through and through incroyable... bien....
[Report This]Date: December 07 2019 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
New chapter and new fav. Was it really 6 months? Wow. glad youre back. I wanted to say this idea was amazing of altering the enviroment and people around instead of transformation. I would love to see this concept again in another chapter. I love this idea of something triggers like a bowl movement, then everyone seeing someone just as a toilet anymore from that point on, this is so awesome! What a great idea. You are the best of these ideas.
[Report This]Date: December 07 2019 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 12
The wait was totally long but worth to wait. I am not enjoying many of the stories on here anymore becuase I am looking for very dark and forced stories. I was so surprised seeing the alert on my email and totally took the time for reading this. And it was absolutely stunning. Sorry to hear you had some life issues and work to do, I totally hope you will write again when you find the time. I missed the Ashley stories so much though eh wasnt present on here, but I loved his reaction and his pissed attitude of being rejected. The jerking off idea you let out sounded hot too bad you let it out. Was not too long neither.
[Report This]Date: December 07 2019 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 12
Is it Christmas already? Hehe *love* Oh my... this is beyond... kinky as I enjoy it. I could continue reading for hours like this. No it was perfectly the right length and I could have even read more. Maybe there is a chance to use Maddy again in another chapter during school or another party, also for some boys. I tried to find some mistakes but couldnt it was just like usual, on such hugh level. So happy right now you made my day with this *love*
[Report This]Date: December 07 2019 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
Hands down? Best chapter of the story so far, and no it wasnt too long. It was perfect a 10 out of 10. So glad you came back, this story is by far the best on here. WB!
[Report This]Date: November 06 2019 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
Missing Ashley a lot, hope you havent stopped writing. It is by far the best sstory ever written, Ashley needs lots of more horror to bring to his victims, hehe.