all around butt insertion tf and anus tf or penis tf are totally my favorit. wonder if cloe also gets turned into something sooner or later. loved the how Hanna was totalls ilence and not saying anything after being used as an anus. I liked it tiny bit more when ashley as doing things by himself where he kinda reacted differently then being with someone else I dont want him to be too different than compared to the half first of the story which I loved so much. really likey the bunny and cat suit idea haha

totly enjoyed the asshole tf idea that was so hot, and the best part was the toilet use and the conversation on the floor in between of the former best friend hannah was telling that lines.

Did not see any mistakes honesstly I tried to look for them, was written perfectly. And I really enjoyed this chapter. I just have a thing for party plots. The transformation was also really great.

Great series to read. Loving all the transformations and the different point of views from the main the character and his victims.

my favorite part was with the toilet paper especialy if it being the young boy becoming literally a brown nowser for phil very hot would maybe like to see a part where the toilet paper is nearly empty in a follow up chapter and the boy kinda has his last service.

the last few chapters were realy hot. I have to say I am more into cruel plots so the tooilet paper idea was god like. would wish to Ashley abandon Toby by time though maybe or turn him too into some thing and kill him off. the phil part was my favorite in this chapter. loved the boy whining and screaming and geting a mouth full of his shit taste lol.

Totally my thing with the toilet paper especialy of turning an entire family into rolls was my favorite part. Phil using the paper then and also the soap was also my favorite, and how Toby was totally not aware at first about it. Ashley being playful as usual was also great. Would had maybe liked it even more of Toby wouldtt have been successful and used someone without finding out. Phil totally having some protein power shits there loved that part.

One of the best shopping experienes I ever had lol. Very well done. Happy Easter to you. I noticed a lot of tiny spelling mistakes btw, mostly you fliped your and youre over 20 times or so haha. But dont worry, that wasnt a problem at all to follow the story. Noticed more than usual mistakes here and there next to the your thing, some tenses. But the chapter was still awesome.  Loved the ending with Phil with using it as gel for a hand job lol.

the last two chapters were so good because of a total Ashley comeback and focusing around him, the ashley chapters are soo much better than missing out o him, the idea of uploading poor jimmy as a virtual character into the internet was awesome, I wonder if he encounters ashley again. couldnt be more cruel how ashley manipulated his former roomate into not caring for Jimmy and then even enjoiyng torturing him, without knowing kinda.

This couldnt have been any better what an incredible idea. My favorite part was the minotaur and dragon. Of course I liked it. I totally have it in front of my eyes how Ashley just put his hand on Tobys head and ... PUSH and he rams towards his monitor.